Birth Mother

What do you say to her?1

What do you think of her?2

She gave you up and after all these years you go to find her.3

What will she think about you?4

What do you want to know about her?5

How do you put these thoughts into questions.6

I've been away from her for 18 years and now the chance comes for me to meet her. 7

How do you look at her?8

Do you hug her?9

Does she enter your life for good?10

is this a once in alifetime chance?11

Will you ever see her again?12

Will she want to be your mother?13

so many questions,no way to form them into words...14

I'm lost in my own head with no way to talk to her.

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  • acbspyder
    January 21
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    ...Breathtaking...

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5.


  • neonlightsxo
    October 6, 2009

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    This person is definitely in a situation. Unless you are this person, than I wish you the best. But if you aren't, great piece, keep it up!