I winced as I brought my shaking toes closer and closer to the edge of the cliffs surface. The sound of the water running down the waterfall made me more dtermined to jump causing adrenalane in my vains. I grabbed Shilo my fluffy and white persian cat out of her cage and craddled her tightly in my arms and said my last words. "I love you Shilo but we are better of this way!" i hugged her to my chest one last time and jumped....
Author notes
Just a quick 7 minute scene for a contest~ Hope you like it!
Comments
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Hrm, I like it. I wish you would've added more depth to the story, and all of the sudden bringing the cat in was a tad akward, but overall great idea and you get applauds for originality!
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Hope you like it KiwiGurl!!
HSM
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