'no, no, no,NO!!!!!!!!!, this can't be, I can't be dying!!!!!!!!' I screamed.
'BEEP, BEEP, BEEP', my heart monitor went. After those last three beats, my heart stopped, thats when i heard the real noise................1
"BEEP, BEEP, BEEP"
It was just my frekin' alarm clock telling me it was 9:00am.I just had another, stupid nightmare. I knew this time that it was becaused i had to start at a new school today. I got up out of bed, and examined myselp in the bathroom mirror. I looked awful, but anyways, I washed my face and brushed my teeth. Now it was time for the real art. i looked around in my quiet room trying to find the box marked makeup. i found it i did my makeup, with my favorite red eyeliner. I found my skinny jeans and my slipknot t-shirt in my closet. i know, slipknot sucks, my it just so happens that this t-shirt is big and comfy. Now, i was somewhat decent. Physicaly at least. 2
My mom was in a pissy mood again. Probably due to the fact that she couldn't get laid last night in a small urban town like this. Even in this urban area, there were a bunch of beer drinking hicks (no offense). Anyways, she started today, with the same words she starts every other day with, "Series, you are not going out the house dressed like a cheap whore!"3
Wow, that really hurts coming from a lady in a booty skirt, halter top, and stilettos. "Whatever you say mom, im going to school, have fun." I replied. i just knew she wouldnt notice me still wearing the same outfit. I grabed toast and headed out the door.
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Author notes
okay, so i know there is alot of mistakes, but i hope its good as in writing and such, yeah, so the girls name is series, and as you can tell her mom is going to be a big bitch throughout the story, and if you guys like it ill keep writing how she gets labeled "goth girl"
so, what did you think, would you like more????, or should i stop writing?
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keepit goin
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i love it
u should writ some more
i LOVE Slipknot -
Im sorry
I didnt mean to insult anyone by saying slipknot was bad. I actually like slipknot. I just said that for a part of the story, my character just doesnt like slipknot. My favorite son is wait and bleed -
Slipknot is great... Oh no you didn't! xD
Anyways, besides the awful mistake of saying that Slipknot was bad, I would like to see more of this and make the chapters bigger.
Byee -
SLIPKNOT IS THE BEST BAND EVER! if you understood the lyrics and the metaphors they put in their music then maybe you would like them... BUT NEVER DISS SLIPKNOT! good writing. a few sentence errors, you might need to refrase them a little, but its a good story so far, keep going... im not gonna give you applause though cause you dissed my favourite band... whats your favourite band?
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