saying goodbye is never easy1
we cry everyday2
the storms never breezy 3
i learned this today4
by looking away5
from all the pain in my life6
others seem7
to hurt alot 8
when they dont have anything9
its tough to find10
the one thing that binds11
is the thing that hurts you the most12
easy breezy 13
is not my life14
this i will not lie15
but for once i learn16
that not everyone has17
a perfect life. 18
saying goodbye is never easy19
in a way its very hard20
but one good thing 21
that i see from that 22
in hope we have23
to seek better things24
that long have passed. 25
so i say to you26
though threw the pain 27
take care of yourself28
and never hope again29
cause i will not be 30
the one to catch you31
oh who are not saine32
i have pain in my life33
this i will not lie34
but when it comes time35
i must say goodbye
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Stop what you're thinking!
can't believe I said that 
Please! Don't leave! -
every millions of tears that fall mark a beloved,honored,and unforgotten......friend
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may Starclan guide you throughout life,Starpaw.
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flaire,i'm on your side with this,f you want to leave,leave,but like bluewolf said,the people you leave behnd, like me will be shattered.....
i can't believe i'm about to say this,but i'm supportng you,so i'm forcing myself to....
well,GOOD--GOOD--GOOD---GOODBYE,Flaire......
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LIKE DIEING A MILLION TIMES!!!!DON'T
GO!!!!!!
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FLAIRE DON'T LEAVE! IF YOU GO IT'LL BE LIKE DEATH! DON'T go
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Don't say bye
Don't leave. Your one of the few people here that's a very good friend to me and I don't know if I can't take it anymore if you leave. Your the best Flaire. You always will be. If you want to leave then I'm not going to stop you. Just please don't leave without me saying goodbye
This was a great poem by the way... -
No...!
(The poem was absolutely tail-waggingly great...as for the subgect on which it was based...)
What! Flaire, if leaving is what you think is right, then that is fine.
If you are okay with it, I'm glad for you, but the ones you leave behind, me, for example, aren't too 'okay' with it.
I support you in this, if it is what you think you need to do.
Just... i'm going to miss you a lot. You are a close friend; its never good when a close friend leaves.
I'm sorry for intruding, being annoying, and ranting, raving, and lecturing you.
God loves you, Flaire, whether you believe it or not right now.
I will miss you. Here's the 'Good-bye Howl' that i've given to others (like Ty).
good-bye, Flaire.
beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 3, ending: 3, dialog: 3, characters: 3.
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Don't go, we'll all miss you!
On the side of the story, great poem! -
.......if you want to leave flarie, then don't let me stop you. sure, i'll cry. I'll cry for the rest of my life. and I'll miss you. role playing will never be the same. never. I wish you could stay........well, i can't put this any other way. Flarie, your my friend, and always will be. you understood me. I wish things didn't have to be that way, and if you change your mind, i'll be happy.
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ima moron. forgot to say how the poem was.
I like your way of ryhming, simple but complex at the same time. You have a great control of the words without using them too well. great job.
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You may leave? awwwwwww. Thats sad. Ill miss ya if you go. But of ya do, have a great life!
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