~1
Forbidden. That is the only word to express the Uchiha Clan. Itachi Uchiha and Sasuke Uchiha were not the best choices for love . . .2
~3
"Sasuke, wait, please stop!" I skid to a stop, watching him pause between the path to the Akatsuki, and Orochimaru's new lair. "Sasuke . . ." I reached out my hands gripping into his white cotton shirt, my eyes didn't water, but I did feel broken. "Please . . . Don't go back." His emotionless eyes glared past my body. He thrashed his sleeve out of my grasp, and headed for Orochimaru. I took several steps back, hanging my head and walking the Death Row, for the Akatsuki.4
~5
They are focused, determined people. The only thing they care about, it their goals. Emotions don't get into the way. Love is pushed aside, for nothing truely matters, but pride.6
~7
"Itachi . . . Are you leaving, again? You just got here!" My feet settled on the floor as I stood from the couch, allowing everyone to gaze upon me as I stared at the oldest Uchiha, still living. We had a steady relationship, like what Sasuke and I had. His dark, crimson eyes glared at me tiredly, but he said nothing. I closed my eyes, and bowed my head in apologies, letting him leave the base.8
~9
It doesn't matter if you love them, respect them, or fear them. As long as they get what they want, they're happy. Then again, I wouldn't know. No happiness has ever shown from any of them. They're all alone. No love, no saddness, no emotion.10
~11
I stared at both of their graves, tears clogging my vision. I placed a Dogwood for Sasuke, and a Waterlilly for Itachi. My tears dripped onto the dark soil that kept them both from showing. My silent pleas were unheard, so I smiled brightly, facing my head to the sky. "You both had me . . . I still love you, Itachi . . . Sasuke. Don't forget that." 12
As the sun set, I walked away, noticing two ravens, soaring the sky above me, and I grinned, trailing after the only memory of them I have left. "Kohona." 13
~14
As the years pass by, the Uchiha Clan begin to ease deeper into thoughts and feelings, still as memories, but faint, and less painful. They keep us all happy, to know that two Ravens still fly, even if their bodies are unground. So to this, I bid my Sasuke, my Itachi, and my Uchihas, a fairwell.15
~16
"Goodbye, my loves."
Forbidden. That is the only word to express the Uchiha Clan. Itachi Uchiha and Sasuke Uchiha were not the best choices for love . . .2
~3
"Sasuke, wait, please stop!" I skid to a stop, watching him pause between the path to the Akatsuki, and Orochimaru's new lair. "Sasuke . . ." I reached out my hands gripping into his white cotton shirt, my eyes didn't water, but I did feel broken. "Please . . . Don't go back." His emotionless eyes glared past my body. He thrashed his sleeve out of my grasp, and headed for Orochimaru. I took several steps back, hanging my head and walking the Death Row, for the Akatsuki.4
~5
They are focused, determined people. The only thing they care about, it their goals. Emotions don't get into the way. Love is pushed aside, for nothing truely matters, but pride.6
~7
"Itachi . . . Are you leaving, again? You just got here!" My feet settled on the floor as I stood from the couch, allowing everyone to gaze upon me as I stared at the oldest Uchiha, still living. We had a steady relationship, like what Sasuke and I had. His dark, crimson eyes glared at me tiredly, but he said nothing. I closed my eyes, and bowed my head in apologies, letting him leave the base.8
~9
It doesn't matter if you love them, respect them, or fear them. As long as they get what they want, they're happy. Then again, I wouldn't know. No happiness has ever shown from any of them. They're all alone. No love, no saddness, no emotion.10
~11
I stared at both of their graves, tears clogging my vision. I placed a Dogwood for Sasuke, and a Waterlilly for Itachi. My tears dripped onto the dark soil that kept them both from showing. My silent pleas were unheard, so I smiled brightly, facing my head to the sky. "You both had me . . . I still love you, Itachi . . . Sasuke. Don't forget that." 12
As the sun set, I walked away, noticing two ravens, soaring the sky above me, and I grinned, trailing after the only memory of them I have left. "Kohona." 13
~14
As the years pass by, the Uchiha Clan begin to ease deeper into thoughts and feelings, still as memories, but faint, and less painful. They keep us all happy, to know that two Ravens still fly, even if their bodies are unground. So to this, I bid my Sasuke, my Itachi, and my Uchihas, a fairwell.15
~16
"Goodbye, my loves."
Author notes
This was something I came up with after seeing Sasuke battle Itachi. It made me cry, and I wanted to share this feeling with my audience.
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Comments
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This is good but sad.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Yes, it was. :-[, but it turned out better than I thought.
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