The events were slowly falling into place, and I knew it was only a matter of time until the blood-thirsty plan would take the lives of millions of innocent pedestrians.
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- Hook Me In A Sentence by CallMeWhenUrRich.
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Ooh, for some weird reason, it reminded me of X-Men. Don't even ask.
Anyway, that's an interesting hook and sounds action-y and I might just read on. Thanks for entering and good luck! 
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