Justin came to school the next day no longer silent, he had forgoten all about yesterday... that horrible.... terribble... his mind stopped when he ran into a boy when he was walking. He looked at the kid he ran into "Sorry man, let me help you there." The boy was maybe a 6th or 7th grader and looked terrified at Justin's 8th grade stature. Justin handed him his books and the little boy scurried off. "Poor rookies." Justin remarked forgetting he was a rookie himself.1
Justin walked into the cafeteria to grab some breakfast and saw Jake sitting at a table with his head burried in his backpack. Justin quirked a brow at him and poked him on his right shoulder and moved to jakes left side. "AHA, gotcha!" Jake didn't even look up. "Fine." Justin went in the line and grabbed some toast. He came back and sat next to Jake. "What's wrong buddy."2
Jake brought his head up, "Nothing... Just stuff at.. well life."3
Justin stared at him, "Okay... Oh I got my physical... God I got my physical." He turned bright red.4
Jake smiled, "Don't feel embarassed we all had to get one, meet me in the locker room after school, I have 8th period off today, so I'm helping the football players, joy."5
The bell rang and they both seperated. Justin struggled through the day not seeing Jake at all throughout the day. Finally 8th period rolled past and Justin took his time and headed to the locker room. He walked into the Gym which led to the locker room, fresh smelling football players were heading out and the soccer boys were heading out to the feilds. Justin waited to see if Jake would come out, but he didn't. So he walked into the locker room and looked around. No body was between the sets of lockers. He looked over and peered through the fence which seperated the showers and the lockers. He heard water running, "Jake, are you naked, I don't want to see anything buddy. Jake?" He walked around and into the showers. He called again, "Anyone there? I'm comming in, cover up!" He peered around the corner, nothing. Then he looked over.6
There stood Jake showering. "Good god man put on some clothes!" Justin whipped around and looked at him and turned red.7
"Sorry... Hey I'll be right out."8
Justin went back out into the gym, "Gross..." Justin waited... and waited..... and waited. He decided to walk back into the locker room. "Jake comon dude!" He walked into the showers again.9
Jake was facing the wall naked. But that wasn't all. Another boy was against the wall furiously making out with Jake. Justin's jaw dropped. He ran out of the showers, wondering what the hell was going on.10
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Ooh, very dramatic ending here. I love the horrifying image that Justin saw after he realized Jake was not alone
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omg who'da thought WOW, that was a BIG surprise, I thought Justin and Jake were going to hook up, and they seem so much older, I thought they were in high school already. This piece was really good, except the font is too light I couldn't read it, had to high light it.
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xD I so knew it!
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i knew it!
'cept for i was hoping he'd hook up with justin.oh well...
i love the story line so far.
the plot thickens.
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Wow.
That's hott.
Nice story lol
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good work!
Interesting write, well done noticing how well you punctuation is very good. -
Oh my!
Didn't expect that at all. I wish that type of thing would have happened at my school. Damn! lol Great job, your writing is improving too, which made this even more enjoyable.
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