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What the hell is Steven doing there in the middle of the night? I only could see his car. Where can he be? I pulled on my coat and shoes and went outside. I was holding a flashlight and walked slowly at the other side of the street.3
“Steven?” I called. Silence. I looked inside his car but there was no sign of him. I made my way to the woods. I don’t know why but I could feel he was here, anyhow. I walked step by step holding my flashlight tight and searched every inch. The forest looked scary and the trees looked like faces, all staring at me. I could hear an owl in the distance. I shivered. It was colder then I thought. I walked as I stumble on a stick and my flashlight felt down. I kneed, searching for it. When I found it I could see someone standing in front of a big tree. It was Steven. I walked towards him and he spun around. He noticed me like always. My flashlight shined right on Steven’s face, his beautiful eyes bluer than ever. He didn’t looked surprise nor happy. He didn’t show any expression. He looked unfamiliar, like a total stranger. Like someone I don’t know. What happened to him?4
“Steven, what are you doing here?” 5
He looked at me and didn’t say a word. Steven is still the guy with all his secrets. I could never figure him out. Actually I didn’t know much about him. So why am I liking him so much?6
“Earth to Steven, hello I’m talking to you!” I said angrily.7
“You shouldn’t come here, Kelly.”8
“You’re not making any sense, you know that?”9
I heard him chuckle.10
“Okay, so am I funny to you? Am I just a joke?”11
He turned his back on me and started to walk away the other direction.12
“Steven! I’m not yet finish with you! Steven, come back here!” I shouted in the dark. 13
He was gone. The second time he left me. He left me all alone in the darkness.14
I woke up this morning with a horrible headache. Gosh did it all really happen? I don’t know what’s real anymore. Maybe I dreamt all of it, just a terrible nightmare. I went downstairs, got myself some aspirin and made me a sandwich. Then I sat down at the couch of my living room and turned on the TV. I watched Nick. They showed Spongebob Squarepants, my favorite cartoon but I couldn’t enjoy it so I clicked on another channel. I watched some local news. Antonia Carl was found this morning dead, a 16 year old girl schooling in Zepto High. She was found in a cabin. She was stabbed several times in her chest. The murder was still not found. Antonia was missing one week, an announcer said.15
Oh no, it can’t be. Is he back? But why didn’t I dream about it? Maybe he doesn’t want me to know. Maybe that’s why Steven was acting so strange. Maybe his dad is back and he didn’t allow Steven to see me? It would be easier if Steven would tell me something. Maybe he just wanted to protect me from his father. Aww. Steven, I know that you still love me. There was some other news. It was about a new missing person. Her name is Tina Schwarz, also a student from Zepto High. I knew her; she is from my English class. I’ve got to do something. I need to talk to Steven. Why doesn’t he want me to help him? I jumped up when my cell phone beeped. I had a new message from Justin. I rolled my eyes. What does he want now? I opened it.16
Hey Kelly…17
I just wanted to ask if you are feeling better now18
And maybe you have time on Saturday? 19
Plz txt back… XOXO20
I text him back.21
Justin, hi, 22
I don’t think I have time on sat.23
I’m feeling pretty solid 24
Thanks for asking…25
Bye 26
Kelly27
I’ve got 1 new message from Justin.28
Oh that’s ok, maybe next time huh?29
XOXO Justin30
I knew for sure that he was very disappointed. But I can’t do this. I like Justin but only as a friend. But I know he wants more than that. Why doesn’t he get it? He thinks I will forget about Steven and move on? It’s not that easy.31
Later that night Rose called me. She told me she’s got a job in Krazy Ricky’s. She also told me to go there tonight, but I told her that I’m not feeling so great. At the dining table my dad and I didn’t say a word to each other. I didn’t really eat much and wanted to go upstairs but my dad stopped me.32
“Kelly, stay, I want to talk to you.”33
“Maybe tomorrow, okay?”34
“Now.” He said with anger in his eyes. “Sit down, Kelly.”35
I sat down, looking at the table. I didn’t want to meet his eyes.36
“So, Kelly, tell me what’s going on?”37
I didn’t say a word. I don’t really know what to say.38
“Don’t keep secrets from me. I’m your father!”39
Tears were running down my cheeks but I hid my face. I don’t want that my dad sees that.40
“Kelly?” my dad went to me. “Kelly, look at me.”41
I didn’t have a choice I looked at him.42
“Kelly, please tell me what’s wrong?” he wiped my tears away with his hands.43
“It’s- It’s…” I cried out loud. My dad hugged me. I didn’t tell anyone yet. My dad was the first one.44
“Steven… He- he broke up…”45
“Oh, Kelly, love isn’t an easy thing. It comes and goes.”46
“No! I don’t want that it goes! I love him. I love him.”47
“Someday you will understand.”48
“What?” I snapped.49
“You are still young, Kelly. You just had your first boyfriend. I know it’s hard at first but…”50
”But what? I should just move on? No, I can’t. I love him!”51
“Kelly, he doesn’t have feelings for you anymore. People break up all the time.” He said calmly. 52
“No, not him dad, I know he loves me. He just wants to protect me.”53
“Protect you from what?” He said confused.54
“From- from his dad.”55
“Huh, what are you saying?”56
“He is… He is alive. Steven’s father is alive!”57
“Kelly, he is dead and he will never come back.”58
“No! I saw him. He was in my nightmares.”59
“You dream about him?”60
“Yes.”61
“Why didn’t you tell me?”62
“I don’t know. He already killed two innocent girls from my school! Believe me, dad. He is back.” 63
I was standing all alone in the middle of the forest. It was dark, only the moon gave me light. Was it the same forest I saw Steven last time?64
Suddenly I heard footsteps coming towards me. I saw a figure standing across from me. I began to run away. I tripped, stood up and ran faster. I thought the forest will never end. All of a sudden I burst into someone. I looked up and saw the figure that was following me. I couldn’t clearly see his face because he covered it with a red cap. He grabbed my arm. I tried to pull my arm away but his grasp was too strong.65
“Please, please, let me go!” I screamed.66
He gets something from his pocket. I could see it was a knife!67
“Oh no… please, please don’t kill me!”68
The figure held his knife in front of my face. I wanted to scream but he covered my mouth with his hand. He slit with the knife my neck and blood splattered everywhere.69
I opened my eyes and sit up. I was in my room. I inhaled deeply and touched my neck. It felt so real, like always. Why does it keep happening to me?70
FRIDAY71
I opened the door and Rose came in. 72
“Hey Kelly, what’s up?”73
“Nothing… I need to tell you something.”74
“Shoot!”75
We were sitting on my bed. I told Rose everything, about Steven and about my nightmares. Rose couldn’t believe it. She couldn’t believe Steven would break up with me. She always thought we were so perfect for each other. I also told her that maybe he just wanted to protect me from his father.76
“If he really wanted to protect you, why isn’t he saying something? I mean he could explain or something.” Rose said.77
“I don’t know. Steven is so weird.”78
“Isn’t he always?”79
A tear run down my cheek.80
“I’m sorry.” She hugged me tight.81
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Steven P.O.V:83
I was in my room playing the guitar. I played Thunder from Boys like Girls. Someone came in into my room. 84
“What do you think you’re doing?” He screamed. 85
He gets my guitar and slammed it into the wall. He stared at me with his angry eyes and grabbed me hard.86
“I need my sleep you’re idiot! Don’t think you can sing because you can’t! So just don’t ok?” He screamed right into my ear. I just nodded. Then he pushed me down the bed. 87
“Steven, Steven, you’re such a pussy.” He leaned down to me and punched my stomach and slapped my face many times.88
I thought about Kelly. I’m so sorry, Kelly. I got another punch on my stomach.89
I didn’t have any choice. I need to do this. I love you, Kelly. I always will. Soon I will be with you.90
He left my room.91
“I need you. I need you in my life.” I said to myself.92
Comments
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Nicely written.
Great job.
~Alex -
Love it

Really well written
Plz write more!

beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


