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David pounced down to the last step and snarled at me. SO HE was what I was smelling earlier... and he was after Lynn!!! And now, after me. 'Damn!' I thought. I braced myself to attack, and Alice stopped me. "No, hon, you don't need to try to attack him, he can kill you." she whispered. 1

"I can hear you, you know that, right?" David laughed with a growl. "I can hear EVERYTHING you say and do... Especially when I'm near you..." he growled. Oh, God, how I hate when he growls. It hurt my ears before, it hurts them even more, now!2

"Oh, great, so you know everything I've done since what happened?" I said blankly. 'no, just since a month ago... been lookin for you since I started changing' I heard him think. "Oh, so you just started hearing me?" His eyes got real wide. He looked at Liz, who was in the same stance I was in, attack mode. 'hmm, I wonder what I could do to...' just then, we both attacked him. "Hell no, dude, you ain't toucin her!!!" I screamed. Both Lynn and I started biting and clawing at him.3

"Oh, so you're a mind reader?" he laughed. What the hell, we're not hurting him! Just then, I had an idea. I grabbed the front leg and started pulling. "FUCK!" he yelped. Just then, he changed back into his human form. 'oh god.' I thought. 4

Blood poured from where I ripped his arm off. I could see the bone bugling out. He yanked his head up at me and snarled. "Well, you know what you were thinking and EXACTLY why I did that!" I screeched.

Author notes

Still working on this... sorry if I don't post on here enough, I'm trying my hardest... but I'm having to juggle school, play practice, parenting, and other shit all at once... so yeah... be patient, I will eventually finish this. I am DETERMINED to finish writing this book. What do ya think so far? Anything need to be changed? anything need to be corrected? Be brutally honest as you can be. thankses.

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  • Megpie2014
    October 5
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    Your welcome Anytime lol


  • Megpie2014
    October 4
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    okay who is talking then???

    • TwiztidMaggot
      October 4
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      It's Liz... and you know what? I just realized... I have 2 Liz's... oh lord. lol. I'll have to fix that! I'm glad you asid something.

  • Megpie2014
    October 4
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    love it cant wait til theres more although i was a little confused was that edward in the begining think 3 himself??

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