In Love With The Vampire Prince (pt. 3)

I woke up the next day, still in severe pain. My neck ached with I firery burn that I couldn't ignore. I waited for the pain to go away, but it only got worse. Even my continuous showers didn't help. I lay on my bed hoping everything would become better, but the pain continued and Chandler hadn't showed up yet.1

I felt my eyelids getting heavy, and a yawn crawled slowly up my throat. Then my stomach made a loud gurgle. When was that last time I had eaten? I couldn't think of the answer because I was tired, but I couldn't sleep because I was hungry. So I just sat there, hoping someone would remember about me. Come to my rescue.2

I felt like a toy left on a shelf that nobody played with anymore. I know it had only been a little while, but these are vampires for christ sake, shouldn't they be more...On top of things? 3

I swear I was about to pass out before Chandler finally walked in with a tray of food. THANK GOODNESS I thought. Then Chadler chuckled.4

"Damn mind-reader." I said under my breath5

"I heard that." Chandler verified, then smiled.6

I was so hungry. Right when Chandler handed me the tray, I pigged out. I didn't care how unmannered I looked, I was starving! Chandler didn't seem to notice. He was really paying attention to the mess in my room. 7

I hadn't noticed what a pigsty it was. There were clothes sprawlled all over the floor, blood stains where Chadnlers idiot of a brother had pretty much attacked me while he was feeding off of me, and there was broken glass. I didn't know how that happened.8

"Hm. Do you like your room this way?"9

"No, but I can live."10

"No, no. You shouldn't have such a messy room. I'll get someone to clean it."11

"It's OK, I can clean it myself."12

"No. I insist. You look tired. You need sleep when you finish eating."13

"...Okay...I guess."14

I got done eating pretty quickly. I stood up and Chandlers cold hand touched me. What was he doing? Suddenly I was lifted up into his arms.15

"Where are you taking me?" I ordered.16

"My room, for sleep."17

"Why can't I just sleep in my own room."18

"I'm getting someone to clean it soon. You need sleep now. I can't feed off of you tonight if your so tired. It could kill you. I'm not taking chances with you Brittney."19

"Why not...You don't L..." 20

"DON'T finish that sentance. Don't think it. Ever. I love you. End of story. You may not feel the same about me, but I do twards you, and always will. It's different remember? It'll take time for you to even have feelings for me if you would."21

I gave up on talking, I was too tired. I closed my eyes and fell asleep in chandlers arms. I went from being cold, to being warm. Very, very warm. I was in his bed. This felt very weird being in his bed instead of my own. And being in the bed in "my room" felt very different than being in my real bed at home. Everything was different. 22

. . . . . . . . . SLEEP . . . . . . . SLEEP . . . . . . . SLEEP . . . . . .23

I woke up, still in Chandlers bed. I didn't know how long I had slept, which means it could still be the same day, it could be the next day, for all I know I could have slept for two days. I was pretty pissed to wake up and my neck still sore. Better, but sore. Chandler walked in. He was dressed up in a suit and his hair slicked back. I could smell his cologne from across the room.24

"A little fancy, now aren't we?"25

"Yes. I am."26

I look at myself in the vanity mirror next to the bed. I was a mess. My hair was sticking up in every direction. Make up was smeared all over my face, giving me that "cheap hooker" look. I was in sweats and baggy white T-Shirt, and worst of all, I smelled like wet dog.27

"Oh boy. I need to clean up."28

"Your room is cleaned now. No bloodstains, no messy bed, no clothes on the floor, no glass. We got you more clothes, and restocked the bathroom."29

"How long am I going to be here."30

"Depends."31

I didn't ask anymore questions I got up and asked Chandler to take me to my room. I didn't want to walk out myself and have some idiot vampire mistake me for trying to escape this luxery prison. I wondered how big this place was while we were walking to my room. This place had to have at least 40 rooms by how many doors we were passing. I think this is only one level of the mansion too.32

"200." Chandeler said.33

"What?"34

"200 rooms. 40 rooms on every level, five levels. 200."35

"Oh. Almost forgot you could read minds."36

Chandler nodded then we arrived at my room. He unlocked the door and I rolled my eyes as I though how pethetic this all was. Having to be locked in a room for someone who supposedly loves me. It was all bull. I pushed my way in front of Chandler not caring how hard I bumped into him. Then closing my door in his face. I was getting undressed then he walked in.37

"EXCUSE ME!" I Screamed.38

"SORRY! I can read minds, not see through walls."39

I quickly wrapped a robe around my bare body, then ran into the bathroom. Chander started talking to me through the door but I just ignored it and turned on the shower. Roughly 10 minutes later, I got out and put on some new clothes. Some skinny jeans and a black T-shirt. 40

I walked back into my room to find that Chandler had left. I got a weird feeling in my stomach. Like, I wanted him to be here. I guessed it was just that I was lonely. I didn't know what was going on. I thought I should just wait. 41

But I waited. And Waited. Then waited some more. It was about midnight then, so I went to sleep. Where was Chandler?42

Is it still moving to quickly? What do you think?

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  • Gossamer Guile
    October 4

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    This pacing is soooo much better. The story is really starting to evolve. I find your concept of vamipire love extremely interesting and unique. So far the title has not come into play, and I love that. I think that it is important, especially when telling the plot in the title, to really take time to retell the "how" aspect of the story. Which is exactly what you are telling me. How Brittney falls in love. So far, I'm still hooked, and look forward to reading more.