Several months earlier Hayle was the new girl in school she had one friend that she had known for ten or more years Jacklyn shows her around and introduces her to other people and Hayle becomes well know and liked by all. Hayle is shy and smiles a lot everyone thinks she is happy but they've yet to hear her life story. She looks happy and acts happy. Hayle's a average 14 year old girl soon to turn 15 shes 5'3 weighs 117 has shoulder length brown hair beautiful brown eyes and a gorgeous smile sporting the pink 'n' green braces she has a nice tan and mild acne now average girls sound like this right??1
Hayles never met her dad her mom was in and out of the hospital when she was a young child. Hayle's mom remarried when she was 9. Her mom is currently getting a divorce from that man right now. Her big brother has cancer and she hasn't found herself/place in the world yet shes kinda down.2
cut to Hayle walking in to the house3
Hayle: Hello? I'm home!! mom? Chris?? Alex??? Mama???? Papa?????4
sets her bag down and climbs the stairs to the kitchen. finds a note.5
"Hayle Chris and I had to go to the hospital for his appointment we'll be back tomorrow. Alex went with Rick Mama and Papa went out to eat so your home alone till tomorrow love you baby girl. mommy!6
She sits down to check her e-mail and oddly there is one from a stranger "I've been watching you closely I like the way your so nice to every one and i like the warm smile you give every one even ppl u don't know or the ones you really don't like but i don't like how fat you are or how ugly your face is i hate every thing about you!"7
she thought to her self this is it the top of the ice burg. She had to do some thing.....8
cut to high school hallway current time 9
Jacklyn: Have you10
Hayle: (sobbing she says) Well Jacklyn you don't know how awful thing are getting. I mean I got an e-mail last night an-11
"Hayle Honeysuckle please come to the office to check out"12
Hayle: I gotta go I'll see you later!13
Jacklyn: but..!14
Cut to Hayle's house bathroom floor15
she's laying there dazed bleeding and over dozed she hears faint calling its aaron but she can't move she passes out soon afterwords b/c of the pain she whispers "The pain I can't bare it any more lord please give me your hand lift me up i know I'm not this low your my Father my Christ I'm sorry i had to fall before i could see Lord-" she was dreaming shes being shaken.16
911 emergency: whats the emergency how can i help you?17
Aaron: Its my G-(Girlfriend?)Girlfriend shes bleeding and passed out on the floor shes barley breathing...please hurry she needs help!18
Aaron: Hayle omg Hayle wake up please baby Hayle (sobbing) I- I L-lo-love you Hayle? 19
Hayle: (slowly coming too)Wah huh where am i how'd you get in you what huh my wrist oww my head what happend?20
Aaron: Hayle you cut you wrist...(she fades out slowly)21
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Author notes
i'm still not through wow i'm taking this far i thought you know a few sentences but iono it just keeps building yeah leme know watcha think ok ok
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Keep it up let me think a little bit but its really good.
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