Her name is Stella...well her real name is Amy but she prefers to be called Stella. Stella is a tall, thin 14 year old girl. Stella was not your everyday teenage girl while everyday teenage girls would wanna go get their nails done and shop at the mall Stella would rather stay home write poems and listen to music. Stella always seem to believe that the world is always against her for some reason, but never really knew why. Stella was alawys being picked on at school because she was different.1
Stella was sound asleep in her room. It was 15 minutes to 6. Then all of a sudden her alarm went off "Teenagers scare the living S@*% out of me, they can careless as somebody screams. So tuck in your clothes or strick a violent pose" Then Stella reached up to the side of her bed and unpluged the alarm clock and floped back down on her bed "get up Amy or so help me I will get you out of bed my self" yelled Amy's (aka Stella's) mom "ah here goes another day of tourture"
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awesome
luved it plz continue there are a lot of things u can do with this story hav fun n plz wite more i reallli enjoyed it gr8
xoxoxo always lana

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There are a few grammatical errors and it is lacking punctuation, but overall it's pretty good. Keep writing and read a lot of books, they help you pick up on errors. Good effort though
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thnx will do
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