cutting is an art 2

sha walked to her locker, tried her combination, and once realizing the combination she was using was for her gym locker, gently laid her head on the cold metal of her locker. Suddenly she felt someone jump onto her back. "Morning sunshine!" Min yelled into Sha's ear. "Morning Min",sha mumbled back. Min, being used to sha being tired in the mornings, jumped off her back and opened sha's locker. "What would you do without me?", Min teased smiling. "oh i would just die!" sha joked back. "alright doll, I'll see you after school." Min says before skipping away. "alright I'll see you than". Sha replied before heading to class.  As Sha walked into her first hour, she saw just the people she didn't want to see. As Sha took her seat all she could think was, welcome to hell.1

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ok not too sure bout this one, hope u guys like it. ooo Min is sha's best friend, stands for minny me  (nickname) her real name is kathy.

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  • Afraid Of Me
    November 11, 2005
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    definitely take it further. i love the last line.

  • Bonafides SnowBunny
    October 26, 2005
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    good job sis, cant wait till part 3

  • Not A Pin Up
    October 25, 2005
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    hmmmm i like it.... i think you should take it further....and it is a little short but good all the same....sounds like me but with my 5th hour lol

  • nobodys-girl
    October 25, 2005
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    lol thanks! i'll try to make the next one longer. thanks for commenting!


  • BeAuT1FuLlyXxBrOkEn
    October 24, 2005
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    I liked this one too...you should probably read it over and fix the grammer...like with capital letters and stuff. you should really try making your stories longer lol so I can leave a better comment! Keep me updated as to when the next one comes out! MuchLoveAlways~~~JJ

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