Always

I hoped one day my dreams would come true1

And today I believe they have2

Everything I have ever wanted 3

Everything I have desired4

Has come true5

Without you6

Nothing would have been possible 7

Cause without you8

I give up9

Nothing ever seems right10

I can't continue without you11

What I would give to hold you near12

Yout my inspiration 13

Your the air that I breathe14

Your my rock15

The centre of my universe16

I would die with you17

Rather than face this place alone18

So baby remember this 19

I will always love you20

Until the day I die and more

not one of my best ones i think

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  • HaydenLautner
    November 7

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    You really need to stop being so negative about your self, this was a great poem.
    It was emotional and it came from the heart, that's what makes a poem so great. And that is what this poem is..
    I really love it


  • BigBadWolfMistress
    October 12

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    awww...its good really david...you've got to be less pessimisstic about yourself...i don't even think i spelt that right...

    loves you much
    ~C~


  • LilMissFearless
    October 3
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    awwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeee !!!!!!!


  • Shadow06
    October 1
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    Excellent poem Dave. It's very romantic. You should write more often.


  • SCREAMxTOxxBExHEARD
    September 30
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    AWWWWW I love this. It's nice.

  • Lodkod
    September 30

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    AAAAAWWWWWWWWW DLF I luv it!!!!!!!!!!!! I know who it is for! but I forgot her name she's not on my friendslist. BUT THIS IS SOOO GOOOOD!

    Lod.
    God Bless

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