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I looked at her as she approached me, invisible to all but me, a big smile on her face, a rose in her left hand, her right fist closed, tight. She approached, slid the rose in my shirt’s pocket and pushed against me kissing wildly. I felt the sting of a thorn piercing my chest, and as she let go I saw the growing red stain on my shirt. She opened her fist... 2
“...this is my dream...” ...and golden dust flew into my wound.3
I gasped... 4
“...you gave me your eternity...” 5
She smiled...6
“...for your mortal love...”7
Oh, so beautiful...8
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what a better tribute than a smile
, thanks sunrising 
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with such competition... i consider myself more than lucky, congrats to you as well my friend, your entry was great...
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Ah congrats my dear friend on a tie.
A wonderful write, as always. You deserved this.
Blessed be
~~Serenity~~
Billie Jean -
May I just smile this time?
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my favorite too, guess sometimes our tastes match , thank you dear jenn
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This story pools your style! It's so you!
This is my favourite..
♥ Jenn -
some competition is worth to lose to ...
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definitely golden, my dear friend, gold is defined, golden is not, therefore it is the stuff fairies are made of... many thanks for this beautiful comment.
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A beautifully imaginative picture you're created here. Hard not to feel yourself right there watching. Makes me wonder if it's "golden" dust, or "gold" dust, and which would be the more valuable. Enjoyed this a lot.
Paul -
i decided to give you some competition...
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not one of my best, all are my best, lol... thank you my friend
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thanks for this nice comment
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I am not surprised to see again one of your best. Golden dust for mortal love...you will make me cry. What's going on with my feelings today?
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wow this is pretty good for only 100 words........
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