Tonight is naught but a frozen memory caught within a hardened heart..1
I am standing upon the brink of my own desire, watching as the waves lash out at the crumbling corners of my plateau. I have not used my time as well as I could have. I have not loved as sincerely as one would have hoped.2
It was once worthwhile, this wait for my love. But now, as I lose my foothold, I beg for the sea to reclaim my soul. I am a spirit of the deep, wishing for eternal rest.3
She is gone, this I know..4
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A drabble - a story of 100 words.
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Wonderful story. It has given me something to think about. There's something so refreshing about standing at the coastline, watching the waves crash.
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This write captures the sadness of a lost soul waiting to be washed away by the waves..beautifully sad and captivating..well done.
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But I like bad girls.
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i like this alot,sry to interupt your life with my foolishness but DUUUUUUUUUUUUDE that was so0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o00oo awesome!!!! >>.<< it was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooookool....yeah i ruined it...the seriousness of this poems comments...i am bad girl...peace
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100 words that say so much more than what it was meant to say. I enjoyed reading this, and I wish that you would of written more. I believe this could develop into something more. GREAT JOB!
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This is truly a magnificant, heartfelt piece you have here. I have always loved the sea. I often wonder though, why it is that so many people decide upon seeing the darkness instead of the light. It's a very interesting question, ne? I can see that this piece definitely hold a mystifying secret, however. Thank you for entering and best of luck to you.
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