THE MAGICAL PRINCESS.
The baby is born.
It's a Girl.
Her name is Clara.
She is our special princess.
She grows up to be
a wonderful Girl.
Clara became ten years old.
Her mother the Queen,
told her again, that she
was a princess,
but Clara still did not
understand,
she was the princess
of the whole kingdom.
The Queen tried every year
on Clara's thirteen'th birthday again to tell her
how she was a lovely princess.
Clara never understood,
she didn't believe
she was so very special.
Then she turned sixteen
and she did understand
that now she is the
Magical Princess of the land.
Suddenly someone said
you are dreaming
again.
What do you
mean?
You are dreaming
of the book you
read.
She is right
I am dreaming
of the book
I read.
But it is so cool
to dream of
being a Magical Princess.
But then my mom said
its true. I am a Princess.
My mom said,
you are a Magical Child
and you always
will be a Magical Princess
and my Magical Child.
I know now and I will always believe
that I will be my Moms
special Girl, a Magical Child
a Magical Princess
to her forever.
The end.
Meagan
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So beautiful poem sweety
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your poem is beautifull!
every daughter should be her mother's princess!!!!
Donna s -
Thank you Grandma.
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Thank's
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Meagan, dear, you are a princess. Just remember that you mom knows best. Love, Gramma
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Wow Meagan I am impressed. What a wonderful job you did here. You are growing so much in your writing. You express yourself so well here and really bring this story to life. Keep writing, you are doing so well.
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Thanks Tear Stained Heart. liking my poem about The Magical Princess.
*smile*
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Thank you Storic. I really lik you ever much.
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Thank you Tear Staied Heart.
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good
Another good one Meagan! You really are coming along in leaps and bounds.
Just regards to presentation - I don't always know when to split my poetry into lines, but I think these lines, would look better like this! What do you think?
"The Queen tried every year
on Clara birthday to tell her
how she was a lovely princess.
Clara never understood she didn't
believe she was so very special"
I think that is a better balance, but it's just a passing thought! Thank you for sharing.
Edited on Oct 22, 7:45 because ''.
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