The Wound - part II

I woke up with a start, shuddering in the cold.  Some days it was hard being alone.  Harder than I liked to admit.  I wrapped my cloak tighter around me.  Finally, I gave in to building myself a fire.  Yet as I returned with the wood, a stranger stood where I had slept.  I froze and hid myself among the trees.  Intently watching him, I realized that he was building a fire.  I cautiously approached.  He glanced my direction and sized me up.  "Are you for or against?" he asked.  "Depends on what side you're on." I quietly returned and added my own wood to his growing fire.  We sat at the fire, and I eyed him warily for some time.  Soon however, we began to trust and even talk.  We became equals... even friends.1

As the battle started up again, we crept out together.  I quickly strung my bow and he drew his sword.  I found myself fighting by his side.  Arrow after arrow I shot into the enemy.  He swung and defeated many more.  After the battle the two of us found a patch of woods to tend to our wounds.  2

It wasn't long before we relied on each other on and off the battlefield.  Yet I began to rely on him more heavily than he relied on me.  Too heavily.  One night, in a battle, my former wound was reopened.  Sometimes I felt like it never completely healed.  The pain from the reopened wound was almost unbarable as it overtook my body.  I felt myself loosing consciousness.  He, entrapped in the battle, could do nothing for me now.  Soon I faded out of consciousness.  When i awoke, I was cold, bleeding and totally alone.  3

But this time, I cleaned the wound carefully.  It would heal and heal right.  But as I cleaned it I realized that I had fallen back into old habits of relying.  I couldn't rely on him so much, no matter how strong he was or how much protection he offered me.  4

Almost a week later, we found each other.  We embraced, both exhausted.  My wound was healing significantly already.  And I would remain my own warrior... I looked forward to fighting by his side.5

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eh, not done - needs some editing, although I may just leave it.

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  • ripplesonwater
    October 22, 2005
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    Hmm...very nice. There's symbolism behind this, I'm sure, and I know what you mean - if I get this like I think I do. I have a good friend who went through something like what you described, depending too much on people, who can be wonderful but will still let you down on occasion...it's hard to realize sometimes, but God is really the only one who will never ever let you down. "I would remain my own warrior"...yes indeed.
    Thanks for sharing this. It's a really creative and beautiful way to describe the situation. :-) always inspiring...
    Edited on Oct 22, 7:41 p.m. because ''.