Smile

Stardust flies, 1

raindrops slip, 2

hearts will tear, 3

and some will stitch. 4

Dreams will fade, so will the pain.5

Dry your eyes,6

open them wide,7

and smile.

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I know I said I was not going to post anything for a little while, but I played some with some words for my Gmail status...and this is what I came up with.
Tell me your opinion! Do you like it?
Okee, bye

-Rose

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  • Yemassee gold member
    December 14, 2009

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    It's pretty good. It's sort of a poem that just accepts how life is and suggests that we make the best of what life is and be happy. Yes, good advice.


  • Classic Violette
    December 3, 2009

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    I like it the way it is, so much said in so few words. You have a gift with poetry and it didn't lose flow which some people struggle with on occasion. Keep writing more

  • TwistedAnomaly
    November 26, 2009
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    Ohhhhh I like it! It's pretty!


  • mema11
    October 8, 2009
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    Love it!

    You let your little light shine with this one : )

  • Plogop
    September 30, 2009
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    Yeah, it's pretty good.


  • pixie queen
    September 29, 2009

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    i like it its cool! and no i dont think tyou have to add anything


  • InjectMeSweetly
    September 28, 2009
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    ITS SOOO GOOOD


  • Foxyn gold member
    September 28, 2009
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    YEAH I LIKE IT!!! and no yoy doint have to add anything on

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