He just stood there. A single tear brimmed in each eye.1
Looking left, he saw his love walk away from the certainty of their future together.2
Turning right, his closest confidante seemed to walk out of his life with her each step away from him.3
He just stood there, in the middle.4
Alone. So alone.5
Author notes
Rea life moment depicted in 55 word fiction format.
Trying to hide pain behind words...lol.
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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this was really great.
i liked it a lot.
good job! -
this is such a deep poem, and yet u said few words. i guess u make ur few words count, eh? i hope things all get better. keep on writing. ur good at it.
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Thank you so much! Appreciation from you always means much more !!
Although, this was one moment I wish I didnt have to live, let alone express it in 55 words.
Thanks.
Loadsa luv n good luck
Pia.
P.S: Happy Diwali in advance!!! -
Great!!!
I htink I know what you mean, my dear girl. Life is hard but through experience we learn to live life to the full. We lose what or who do not deserve us.
You certainly did a great job with just 55 words. I wish I can do such shorty short stories. I become too elaborate
Love and blessings from Coimbatore - Joel -
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