The Prince and the Peasent Girl

There lived a boy and a girl in a far off land, the boy was a strong, handsome knight in1

training. He was very skilled with a sword, his master said that he would become a strong sword 2

master, he would slay dragons and become a king. He lived in the palace, each day3

he would draw of dreams he had, he would sit on the roof of the palace and look at the small 4

village that layed at the base.5

Watching the children play.6

He wished everyday that just once his father would allow him to go 7

and visit the village. But his father refused to allow his only son to leave his studies and 8

visit peasants. So the boy drew the village people, and one girl stood out from the rest, 9

she was the only one who noticed the boy sit on the roof. 10

He never really noticed her until he looked at the drawings, she had long beautiful brown hair, 11

her eyes were green like the leaves on the trees, he didn’t know much of the girl. He wished 12

he could get to know this girl, so one day he climbed the tree in the courtyard, and 13

jumped the brick wall.14

He was finally free, but he didn’t know what to do now. So he sat in the shade of the tree and 15

thought of what he should do, when a quiet, shy voice whispered to him, "Hello" 16

He looked up to see a smiling girl looking down at him, he stared at her and then realized it was17

the girl he saw from the village. 18

"Your the boy who sits on the roof, are you not?"19

He stared at her for seconds more and then responded,"Y-yes, hello." She sat next to him, 20

and looked at the sky, "Is it sadding to live alone in the palace?" She looked at him,21

"Yes, sometimes, the only thing that makes living there worth while, is my teacher, and my 22

drawings.23

But I just could not stand to stay there anymore, I am always alone. My father does not allow 24

me to have friends."25

"oh, if you want I can be your friend" She said with 26

a smile. 27

"That’s kind of you, but do you know who I am?" 28

He looked down.29

"Of course I do, but that does not matter to30

friends"31

"Oh, well then, my name is Daein."32

"Mine is Cisa." They both smiled at each other.33

"So I assume you snuck out?" Cisa asked Daein.34

"Yea, my father refused to allow me out so, my only option was to sneak out. I’m sure he won't35

even36

notice im gone."37

"Well than lets go do something" She said as she stood up and smiled at Daein.38

"But, what?" He too stood up.39

"Well what have you always wanted to do if you were able to leave the palace?"40

"I've always wanted to go and see a river, I wanted to draw one." He smiled.41

"Ok, I'll take you there. But we have to be careful, a lot of monsters have been seen42

somewhere near the river."43

"Oh, ok." The walked down the street to the edge of the forest. It looked dark, and had a 44

feeling that seemed to roll out of it45

with the wind.46

"You know you don't have to do this." He looked at47

her.48

"No its ok, I love going by the river, I know my way 49

though the forest so we should be safe." She50

said as she grabbed his hand and pulled him behind her51

into the forest. 52

"So is the river pretty?" He asked as he tried to keep up with her. 53

"Yea its the most prettiest thing I have ever seen. But I’ve never left this valley before."54

"I'll take your word for it." Daein laughed.55

Daein let go of Cisa's hand, and stopped. He listened, and heard a nose he had never heard before.56

"Cisa? What is that sound?"57

She stopped and listened,"Thats the river, we are getting close, its should be a little further 58

ahead." She smiled.59

"Really?" His eyes got big from excitement.60

"Yes so lets getting going." Cisa laughed. She grabbed his hand and they started running until,61

they came to a clearing, they pushed through the bushs. 62

"Wow" Daein said as he looked at the scene standing before him.63

The scene was many shades of green that seemed to fit together like a puzzle, the sky was clear 64

and the sun was high in the sky. The blue river was so clear he could see the fish and rocks 65

laying in it. 66

He looked at the river bed and saw something shining at the bottom, he reached his hand in and67

picked it up. He tossed it from hand to hand, it looked so beautiful. "Cisa? What is this?" 68

He asked as he held it up to show her. 69

"Wow that’s a soul stone, there very rare. Its so pretty." Daein looked closer at it, it 70

was a small crystal that was any orangish red. When the sun hit it, rays of light shined off 71

it, all the colors of the rainbow. 72

The rays shined off Cisa's eyes that made them shine which made them look like green emeralds.73

She smiled. "I have heard that many man give them to the beloveds. But since there so rare, 74

its something they treasure." She said to him still gazing at the soul stone.75

"Really? That’s interesting." He said as he smiled.76

"Oh, didn't you say you wanted to draw a picture of the river?"77

"Oh, right. But, I like having people being in the picture." He said.78

"If you want I can be in it." She said with a smile.79

"O.k." Daein said with a smile. He started drawing the scene, he started by drawing Cisa. When 80

he was done Cisa looked at it.81

"Wow that’s beautiful." It was a picture of a forest with a river flowing in front of it, and a 82

girl,83

she sat there with a caring expression on her face, her eyes shined like crystals, her hair 84

flowed with the wind, her clothes were exactly like the real thing, the light blue dress and the85

small white shoes. It looked as if everything fit together perfectly.86

"Really?" He said as he blushed.87

"Yes its so perfect, it looks as if though the wind will blow out of the picture itself." Cisa 88

said as she smiled.89

Then they heard russling in the bushs, and Daein grabbed Cisa's hand, "I think its time for us 90

to go now." He said as he pulled her to her feet.91

"Oh, ok. It would probly be best if you got home to." The started running towards the village.92

But Daein stopped and looked at the sky and saw smoke rising in the distance. They finally leaped93

out of the forest and into the village.94

Daein and Cisa looked in horror as the looked at the scene before them, the entire village was 95

burned down.96

Cisa tightened her grip on Daein's hand and they slowly walked through the ruins. Everyone was 97

gone.98

No blood had been spilled, so Daein thought that the villagers most have been taken to the 99

palace as prisoners.100

He looked at the ground and looked at the prints. 101

"Daein? What do u think happened?"102

"Well it looks like no one was killed in the village, but we need to be on alert. Lets head to 103

the palace." Cisa nodded in agreement, and they ran towards the palace. The palace looked as if it,104

nothing had happened to it, but men were stationed out side where not of any that worked for 105

Daein's father.106

"Lets head in. I will get us both over the wall. So get on." Cisa climbed onto Daein's back,107

and Daein climbed up the tree. And jumped the wall. He helped Cisa get off his back and he 108

pulled her behind him.109

"O.k. we need to get to my room. I have something that can help." Daein whispered as they stopped,110

at a corner as a man pasted by. He again pulled her behind him. The stopped as he peaked around a111

corner and say that he could not pass. 112

"Daein, what are we going to do now?" 113

"Fallow me." They went back till they came to a painting.114

Daein Pushed a brick behind the painting and the wall slid to the side and he pushed Cisa in 115

ahead of him. And they116

walked up a stair case and the wall ahead of them opened up. They came into a room that was dark117

as night.118

He let go of Cisa and walked over to the closet in the corner and pulled out a huge sword with a119

green embraled incrusted in it, and a shilver cross in it.120

"Oh you might need a weapon to." Daein rummaged through the chest in the closet, Cisa walked over to Daein.121

"Actually i don't, I have a weapon of my own."122

Cisa stock out her hand and it started to glow, and a hug sword appeared, it looked as if though123

it was made of fire. "This is my weapon, it is a spirit sword. It is very powerful. And very 124

rare."125

"Wow, ok. Now we have to get to my teacher, he will have a plan. So i will need this." He takes 126

out a second sword, more great than his. "My teacher entrusted this to me. I am sure he will127

have more use for this than I." He pulled Cisa to the hidden stair case.128

He slowly headed to the bottom of the stair case, he stopped half way down and looked down and 129

moved two steps back and pushed another brick. The stairs lifted up to reveal another stair case.130

"where does that lead?"131

"It leads to the catacombs, or the dungeons. Its where they most likely are keeping everyone."132

"Well then lets go." She said as she pushed Daein towards the new stair case. Daein searched133

around for something to light for light. Cisa moved her hand around and found an old candle,134

and she lit it, and handed it to Daein. 135

"Here you go."136

"Thanks" They finally got to the old catacombs. And heard noses coming from a cell near the door.137

They ran to the cells and saw the villagers. And Daein's teacher. "Sir I have come to rescue 138

everyone, but i will need your as stance. We must over through the men responsible. I have brought139

your sword, will you assist us, sir?" He said respectfully and unlocked the cellar door.140

"Of course, I will, the leader is Derasavve, he is a cruel man, he may not be easy to beat. He141

is residing in the thrown room. He has the king there, and who is this young lady with you?"142

He asked as he poked his around Daein to look at Cisa.143

"H-hello, my name is Cisa. But no time for introductions, we have to get going." Cisa said, 144

as she headed for the stair case.145

"Is that the girl you are always drawing on the roof?" He whispered to Daein.146

"Y-yes." Daein replied as he blushed. Daein looked at Cisa as she lead the way up the stair case.147

they got to the main hall without being seen.148

"Daein you lead the way." Cisa said as she moved to the side to let Daein go past her.149

"O.k. the thrown room is right over there. Ugg. It looks like we will have some difficulty getting in."150

Daein said as he pointed to the men standing in front of the doors that lead to the thrown room.151

They moved closer and walked out from behind a wall. Daein, Cisa, and his teacher draw there 152

swords. Cisa cut the heads off of two mean and Daein stabbed two others, and his teacher killed 153

one man with a single blow.154

They pushed open the big wooden doors, and saw the king had been slan. His head lay on the floor155

and his body limp and motionless. Blood splattered on the floor. Daein clenches his fists and 156

holds his sword tight.157

He charges at Derasavve, to full of rage to care about the fact he is out ranked. He jumps at158

Derasavve and spins around him to try to cut his head off from behind, but Derasavve jumps159

forward to avoid him. 160

Cisa sees that Daein needs help, and she jumps at Derasavve, She is able to distract him long 161

enough for Daein to thrust his sword into Derasavve body and cut off his arm, blood splatters 162

all over Cisa. Derasavve turns around and draws his sword and thrusts at Daein, but he doges.163

Dersavve turns to Cisa and thrusts his sword at her. To slow to doge the blow he cuts her arm164

but does not cut it off. Cisa screams in pain and Daein runs to her add. "I'm fine, just finish 165

it." She says as her sword disappears.166

Daein's teacher goes to Cisa to try to help her. Deain turns to Derasavve,"Now you will pay for167

your crimes." Daein runs at Derasavve and jumps over him and cuts his back. Derasavve yells in 168

pain and thrusts his sword at Deain.169

Deain is injured by the blow, his shoulder hurt, Deain jumps at his enemy, Deain thrusts his 170

sword into Dersavve. He pulls the sword up through Derasavve cutting him in half. The blood splatters on everything.171

The blood slides down Deains sword.172

He looks at Cisa, and runs to her. "Are you alright?" Deain asks with a worried face.173

"I'm fine, its not that bad, your the one who is hurt." Cisa says to Deain.174

Days later after the slaying of both the king and Derasavve, Deain is to be crowned king.175

Cisa is there at the crowing. Deain looks at Cisa and puts something in her hands. "I do176

believe you said that men usually give this to there beloved." Deain says with a smile.177

Cisa opens her hands and looks at the soul stone they had found days earlier. "I'm glad i 178

snuck out, cause i met you." Deain says to Cisa. Deain had the stone made into a necklace.179

"I am to." Cisa said with a smile on her face.180

"So will you be my beloved?" Deain asked Cisa with a smile.181

"Of course." Cisa smiles and hugged Deain.182

Cisa and Deain live the rest of their lives, loving each other and taking care of those they183

love and care about. They role their kingdom together.184

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  • I am forever me
    September 30
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    ITS COOL

    a little rushed and a little bit lost with some lines but i like it good job.
    xoxoxo always lana