Come out and play

Lily was dead!! How could she be cried her poor twin her sister her friend. It’s impossible!!!! “Lily is not dead” cried Sara sobbing now. “You poor dear now take some deep breaths it’ll be ok “said the nurse from the Miller Hospital. Some officers are here to see you so you need to calm down; can you do that my dear? 1

Officer Kenny entered the room…. “Hello Sara” he says in a deep2

booming voice that held no real comfort at all.”Can you remember what happened”? Sara whose face and voice were now empty, hollow said in a voice that was not hers said “I should be dead, it was me he meant to kill not her, me. He confused us everyone confuses us, I mean confused us.” “It was late Saturday night” Sara said continuing to use a voice not hers “We were on our way home from Jesse’s party. Sara was talking a mile a minute about her new crush and then it happened, he killed her.” “He killed her.” Sara broke down crying again. “It’s my all my fault! I just had to take the shortcut knowing she would come with me if I gave her my puppy dog face” Sara said all this while sobbing heavily. The nurse came in then and gave her a shot so that she fell asleep with the name Lily on her lips.3

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Two weeks later5

Sara couldn't sleep, she barely ate she always looked so pale6

On this morning Sara looked at her Mother, a father had never been in the picture " I feel so horrible mom, I feel like this is all my fault and its me who shouldn't be alive" "Oh sweetie, don't ever say that again. It's not your fault what happened it's that murdering killer that should have the blame, don't do this to yourself. Let me be glad at least one of my daughters is home safe." Mom said all this in a rush of words.7

Sara couldn't stop thinking of him though, he will come back, I feel it in my heart, my sister is warning me. Sara thought this all during the day.8

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Later that night10

Sara was sitting in her room when she heard a scream a blood shattering scream from her mother's room and then a voice that could only be the killers say" Come out Sara Come out and play"11

Sara ran as quietly as possible down the stairs to the phone "Damn it" she thought as she saw that he had cut the phone line. She had to think quickly she knew that and then she figured it out.12

Sara ran madly to the computer room and locked the door behind her.13

Signing on as quickly as she could she sent an email to 911 services explaining her situations. The police said that they were on the way and then Sara heard it again closer though "Sara come out, come out to play"14

Sara began to pack furniture against the door Terrified now she heard him try the door curse and said it a cold cruel voice " Sara your Mothers not dead…. yet so if I were you I'd come out and play." Sara cried out "The police are on there way" He laughed an evil laugh and said "Now Sara we both know that I cut the phone line" "I used the internet" Sara stated in a definite type of way. "You little Bitch" He screamed at her through the door but just then a voice that was a deep booming voice said to the killer "Put down the Gu....." Two gunshots were fired out and Sara heard Officer Kenny Say "Come on out Sara its ok now"15

Author notes

kinda scary but I think this is one of my best stories yet

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  • The Take Over
    November 4, 2005
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    HOOOOOOOOOOOPE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! WHY MUST YOU SCARE ME SO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    WHY, I ASK YOU, WHY???????????????????????????????????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????? ?????????

  • Hell In Harmony
    October 20, 2005
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    Sara was sitting in her room when she heard a scream a blood shattering scream from her mother's room and then a voice that could only be the killers say" Come out Sara Come out and play"
    Sara ran as quietly as possible down the stairs to the phone "Damn it" she thought as she saw that he had cut the phone line. She had to think quickly she knew that and then she figured it out.
    Sara ran madly to the computer room and locked the door behind her.
    Signing on as quickly as she could she sent an email to 911 services explaining her situations. The police said that they were on the way and then Sara heard it again closer though "Sara come out, come out to play"




    AHHHHHHHHH
    Lol