One or Two Words

Walking.
Running.
Sweating.
Marching.1

Playing.
Singing.
Raspy.
Spitty.2

Loud.
Quiet.3

Halting.
Slipping.
Falling.
Rising.4

Adrenaline Racing.
Relaxing.
Focusing.5

Breathing.
Overheating.6

Frustrated.
Crying.7

Prideful.
Swallowing.
Apologizing.8

Friends.
Family.
Life.

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This is a summary of my day yesterday and today. let's see if you can figure it out...

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  • Rorshach gold member
    September 30

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    Sounds far more exciting than any of my days. Very punchy, and full of youthful energy.

  • WildWolf1092
    September 28

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    My first impression was that the person was exerciising and then I realized that you were marching in band! Write about the things you love and you will go far.