Could he be the one?? part 2 (do over)

"Oh, OK then, that's just fine, just fine" said Melissa as she tried to hold back tears.She knew this was destined to go wrong.As she looks at James for the last as eyes began to water. Its that kinda of moment when she knows that its about to end. Frozen in that moment, Melissa just stood still like a rock. " I would die for you. Goodbye" Melissa whispered "Forever" The end of the day bell rings and Melissa runs home.1

As she walks through the kitchen she stops to go to the small little brown draw, she searches through it until she found a stake knife, she took the knife and went upstairs to her bedroom crying her eyes out. She goes to sit in the tiny corner of her bedroom and starts to cut her wrists. On the left wrist she cut "O-N-C-E" and on the right "L-O-V-E-D" She leans against her midnight blue colored wall while knowing that she only has minutes left to live before she bleeds to death.2

Meanwhile at James house he decides to ask his so called girl of his dreams out. So he picks up his phone and dials the number "Hello?" asked Melanie the girl of James dreams "Hi..umm Melanie, I..I..." at that moment James froze "You what?" AT that moment James had realized that Melanie was not for him. That he and Melanie had nothing in common. That he only ended up starting to like Melanie because he thought that Melissa would never love him. "What ever weirdo, you see this is why nobody likes you. Except that emo loser girl you so call a friend" "You know what Melanie who cares about what you have to say anyway. I mean just because your not popular dosen't mean your not fun to be around. And Melissa is not a loser, shes the girl of my dreams and I gonna go get her back" argued James as he hangs up the phone. 3

"Now to go call Melissa and tell her how I really fell before its too late" said James as he dials in Melissa's number to tell Melissa how he truly feels. But little did he know it was already too-late. As Melissa sits there in the tiny dark corner of her room
her phone rings, she picks up but dosen't say anything "Hello? Melissa? I need to tell you something. I need to tell you that I was wrong. I love you, not Melanie. I have been so stupid not to tell you how I truly feel. I just ended up liking Melanie because.....because I was scared...I was scared that if I told you that I loved you that you wounldn't want to be friends anymore. Melissa,I...I love you"

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