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The wind-driven snow beat against the frosted windowpane. The storm had been howling through the trees for hours. Inside the cabin, Kenny Rogers sang a song on the radio that was softly playing, the title escapes me now, but it was something about love. The flickering glow of a fire reflected in the antique mirror, giving the room a cozy feel compared to the bitter cold outside.4
As I lay in front of the fire on the soft beige carpet, I could see myself in the mirror. I looked so much smaller than my actual five foot, one inch frame. Perhaps it was distortion from the old glass or maybe just the chardonnay going to my head. I took another sip as I scanned the odds and ends on the hearth, a clay pot with a peacock feather poking out, a small bucket full of kindling and a set of brass tools to tend the fire. I can feel your eyes upon me from across the room, soaking in every nuance of me, like a photograph. I smile as you pad across the floor to join me.5
Leaning across the crocheted blanket that we sit upon, you kiss me. I feel your tongue slipping in between my lips, in search of mine. I can taste the wine on your lips as you kiss me passionately, tickling my upper lip with your mustache causing me to giggle as you take your first kiss of the evening. 6
Moving the plates out of the way from our dinner to celebrate our one year anniversary, you pull me onto your lap and wrap your arms around my waist. Taking your head into my hands I softy and tenderly kiss your lips. Breaking our kiss just long enough for me to peel your shirt off, I admire the way the light from the fire dances across your face and muscular chest as it reflects off the mirror hanging on the wall behind us, causing an almost blinding light in my eyes. I can’t resist the temptation to play with the dark small curls that adorn your chest, as I lean in close for another passionate kiss.7
Returning the kiss hungrily, you remove my silky, blue blouse, causing my hair to cascade around my shoulders, allowing it to frame my face. You moan in adoration at the sight of my womanly pillows that adorn my chest covered in a baby blue lace bra.8
Tenderly you run your finger tips across my creamy, smooth skin that covers my collar bone and slowly they find their way down my chest, exciting the rubbery 9
tips of my womanly mounds, as I shudder under the feel of your warm fingertips upon my now cool skin. 10
Pressing me back on the blanket, you stand and remove your belt, and slide your black wrangler jeans over your narrow hips, exposing a tight tummy, well define thighs and calves before kicking your pants aside nonchalantly. Kneeling in front of me, never taking your eyes off of mine, you slip my black skirt and baby blue lace thong off in one swift motion, throwing them atop your pants. Suddenly a hint of playfulness shines into your pretty hazel eyes, as your hand searches for the pot with the decorative feather. Realizing what you’re about to do I try to squirm out of reach, but you stop me with a hand to my ankle, 11
smiling even bigger now. 12
With the feather in hand you slowly and teasingly run it across the bottom of my feet, making me laugh out loud and move my feet away from your reach. Continuing to run the feather up the length of my leg making me giggle even more, you ever so delicately run it across my warm, wet, heavenly treasure, making my gasp and moan at the same time. 13
Laying the feather down by my side, you gaze intensely into my eyes, finding exactly what you want to see. Slowly you position yourself atop of me, capturing my lips with yours and sucking my bottom lip into your mouth as you kiss me. 14
Feeling the hardness of your manly pleasure slide slowly into the envelope of my love, making us become one, surrounding us in the closeness of love, you kiss me, slow and soft as you lovingly move in and out of my heavenly pleasure, taking me to heights higher and beyond the tallest mountain. I begin to envelope you within me, surround your hardness as I begin to release love’s warm, wet liquid onto you and over you, spilling my warmth. 15
You push my hair out of my eyes as you kiss me once again, planting another on my forehead, you smile upon me as you continue laying on top of me, still connected as one, savoring the last minutes of love's passion together.16
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wow! that was so romantic and seductive. you captured the tastes and everything. well done.
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sensual stuff
good work
xxoxo
anna -
I was pleasantly surprised after reading this. For the time that you have been on the site, you have really honed in on your skills and improved upon them dramatically. I remember back in the day some of your stories and the raw talent just aching to escape. Well, it broke the chains on this one. Nicely done indeed and very impressive.
~ John
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wow
what a wilds ride and well writen all the best
Paul -
Beautiful poem with a beautiful poem for the romantic theme of these words.
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beautiful picture and the story fit it perfrctly, very well written and I enjoyed reading this masterpiece, you should be published
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wowsa!
keep up the good work =)
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very nice
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you wrote this very nicely, and made a great job using the words to create image and feeling in the readers mind..wonderful job! great write
S.C
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That looks like a pic from like romeo n juliet
nice
good write and goodluck in the contest!
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WOW!!
this was sooooo good, i really enjoyed reading this.
very, very nice.
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OMG!!!!! I love this so much i didn't want to take my eyes away from it... This is one hell of a write.. Great job and good luck in the contest.
Lela -
a nice touch of erotica, done with class and not crass. I like the setting and I like the detail of the feather. this is not the ordinary sexy write. well done.
I wish you luck in the contest.
~travis
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I like the passion in this piece. It's not just about sex. It has all the elemnets of love, adoration, appreciation, passion, ecstacy, desire, yearning and yes, even a little lust. I am very impressed. You did a great job here and the attention to detail was nice to see as well. This is a great entry! Thank you for entering our contest and good luck!
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I guess it is rue Grannyeri, you do capture readers by the title of your pieces!
I am glad you enjoyed it. 
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Outstanding!
Midnight Lace......... this is sooooooo erotically sexualllll.
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From the title I thought this might have been outside somewhere, but the windy is outside, and the passion is inside. NIce write.
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