Hayle's delima

The characters are Hayle,older brother Chris, younger brother Alex, mother Sandy, EX husband Bill, Grandma, Grandpa, best Friend Jacklyn, new friend Kaylie, new friend ceaira, and boy friend Aaron.1

main characters are Hayle, Jacklyn, Chris, Sandy, and Aaron.2

Scene one Hayle writing in her journal.3

hey                                     October 18th4

I've been here for almost two months and I don't know I'm ready to go back home, except the fact that Bill is there and I know he won't leave us alone when we do move down there. I know because he calls us almost every night and we live nearly 3 hours away. I don't understand why since they are getting a divorce why he calls us every night now. He should just leave us alone. He's dead to me so i should be dead to him. Since I've been gone he asks my mom Sandy about me and my Big Brother Chris and we tell her not to tell him any thing about our personal life or us in general but she does any ways and I don't know what else to do other than not talk to her about my personal life any more. He has messed up my life enough I wish he would just leave me, my mom and my family alone. Me and Chris don't like him he's Alex's step dad not ours so he needs to stop. Why is he doing this?? I don't know what I'm going to do but I'll figure it out.5

Cut to high school hallway.6

Jacklyn: Hey girl whats u- Whats wrong?7

Hayle: Well moms at it again Chris called last night and he was upset (him and mom went to Cabot for his appointment today) well he said mom was talking to Bill for the longest time and he was really mad and we asked mom not to talk about us (me and Chris) to him at all, but...she does it any ways I don't know what to do...what do I just stop talking about my life or something?8

Jacklyn: Well you can't just stop talking to your mom.....could you??9

Hayle: yeah i guess your right shes my mom i love here to death.10

Jacklyn as the bell rings)Well I guess we can talk bout it over lunch.?11

Hayle: yeah ok luv ya girl12

Jacklyn: lata!13

Cut to lunch line 14

Hayle: any ways i have so much on my plate i don't know where to put it all since I'm not hungry. ha ha15

Jacklyn: At least you have a good since of humor with it all.16

Kaylie:Hey you two can i sit with y'all??17

Jacklyn and Hayle: where talking personal if you don't mind..18

Kalie: no its kool!19

Hayle: Thanks20

Jacklyn: Salad?21

Hayle: Well duh!22

Now Hayle and Jacklyn are sitting down eating their lunch Jacklyn listening carefully.23

Jacklyn: omg wow you don't really wish that do you??24

Hayle: which part me dieing or him being dead?25

Jacklyn: both 26

hayle: yeah i do I'm not happy anymore i mean no boyfriend few friends big brother with cancer I'm no happy I'm sad..I'm not what i look like27

Jacklyn: Hayle I love you so much and i know its hard for you right now but as far as you not being happy you could fooled me!28

Hayle: I know I try so hard but I'm running out of energy.29

Jacklyn: Have you told anyone else?? Have you tried to i mean have you hurt yourself???.......30

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Author notes

haha this isn't all but i need to get off i'll write more later!!

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  • ill-neva-cryout
    October 19, 2005
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    hha thanks to all of you lol well yeah i have alot moret to write i wrote all of scene one in one maybe two hours ummm yeah but when you got a migrain u don't need to look at a computer screen but it took me 15 mins to type it all!!


  • carmel apple
    October 19, 2005
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    very gripping Heather. Its sad to. I can't waitto read more. hmm not certain about a name though

  • CedricDempNQ2
    October 18, 2005
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    An interesting and absorbing little tale here. Enjoyed reading.
    'A Dilemma' - might be a title, but that's just an opinion.
    Ced

  • CedricDempNQ2
    October 18, 2005
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    An interesting and absorbing little tale here. Enjoyed reading.

    Ced