Two lovers tumble through a motel door. Their limbs entwined as they plunge into the darkness. Hands and tongues explore new territory. 1
Through the haze of lust two shots ring out. 2
She shoves him off the bed smirking down at his lifeless body. 3
“You get what you pay for, cheapskate.”
Author notes
I wrote this for the contest Can You Write a Story in 50 Words?? It wasn't quite as hard as I thought it would be. Good idea!
A contest entry
- Can You Write a Story in 50 Words?? by KillerQueen.
225 points, ended October 7, 20 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent...quick pace, interesting storyline and sublime ending.
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Thanks. I appreciate that.
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Wow. Good job. Interesting setting and plot!
Exactly 50 words, well done!
Good luck.
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