Too Late,Almost Too Early.

They're saluting from Hell.1

They're despising from Heaven.2

They're hating from the World.3

I react with insticts.4

Things are happening too fast5

for me6

to react otherwise.7

So8

dont blame me for the 9

salutation with Hell,10

or for despising Heaven,11

or for the hatred I share12

with the World.

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  • Rorshach gold member
    September 30

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    Sounds like you are telling the whole world to f off here.
    Like the other comments, I'd like to find out where all of the anger came from.


  • Lawrie gold member
    September 26

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    A lot of pent up emotion is displayed through the words here.

    Like the previous reviewer, I am wondering who 'they' are.

    Line 4: insticts should be instincts.

    Nicely worded, but why the hatred?


  • Lies4Truth
    September 26

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    Lots and Lots of anger here really. What has caused you to be so angry? I liked it none the less Just wondering who they is though. Good job