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There once was a great flood upon the land. Many people died. A man and his dog were fortunate enough to be rescued from the rising waters. They were brought to a shelter, where they were given hot food to eat and warm blankets. The man didn't eat much. He sat up all night crying over his lost possessions and worrying about the future. The dog slept soundly at his master's feet with a full belly.2
Laura Barrette Shannon3
Toltec Warrior 10-18-054
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I love animals. They can teach us so much. I would be honored to contribute to your magazine. Let me know what I could do to help.
TW -
I'm looking for a writer for an animal emagazine I'm working on if your interested please get back to me! Your a great writer
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Ah! Excellent! Yes poet, makes perfect sense! Very profound, you have a knack for saying much with little. Love it! Such a truth here, timely in these days and every day. Never heard it put so well in such a way. Please, Poet, post more, more, more!
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Thanks for your comments. I was waiting to see if this story would make any sense to anyone, besides me. I am experimenting with short, very short tales, with lessons imbedded in them. This is the first one I've posted. I have six or seven so far.
I have been trying to look at things around me in a different way. I'm trying to find lessons in the dramas I see in peoples lives. It's something new in my awareness training.
Thanks for coming by!
Laura -
Such a simple little tale, packed with such wisdom and I'm sure something we all can relate to. Isn't it strange that in the great scheme of every thing we all can relate to this error in judgment. As if it were meant to be
Love Tara
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Wow. This is a terrific message. Absolutely draws the reader in and klobbers them ever so gently with a very wise lesson!!!
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Absolutely perfect, Toltec! What a message you send here, speaking eloquently to us all about our own priorities.
peace
doug
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