"He calls a mansion,1
not a house but a tome."2
that's were he lives at the end of the room.3
waiting for an unsuspecting visitor to enter,4
the he'll strike! 5
Screams! 6
"Please someone help!7
I'm bleeding and I can't stop it.8
I'm dieing and I'm all alone.9
Somebody come,"10
but no one comes.11
they'll die and rise again.12
Lost now to the known world.13
Not to make any contact with the living,14
not,of course, unless they were hungry.15
Now it is them who waits,16
and now it is someone else's turn to die.17
Someone else's turn to become a vampire.18
Someone else's turn for the kiss of death.19
Author notes
thanks goes out to Zorillathingy for help with a line!hope you like it!
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o well, i usd it anyway, i'll put your name in the Author's comments. thanks again!
pen on0
Casey
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hey thanks!lol ha ha he he! yeh it was starting it, but it got easier! thanks for reading,
pen on,
Casey
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Wow, this is a really hard contest,v ery strict, but you have come up with a good entry! Hell, I would say you've got a very good chance at winning this, but considering atm you're the only entry, i'd say you've got an 100% chance of winning lol!
Good luck with or without any competition
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oh i was just saying a random line. you can do whatever you please with it. usually for comments i just make up ome line
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thanks to all who commented on my work. zorillathingy did you man to add that, or change the line to that, because i like it alot and would... if you want me to.
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spiffy!
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she waits, enveloped in shadow, waiting for the next victim...
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Sweet! I loved this.
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Thanks
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hey, thanks! i really like your work. you'rean alsome poet.
pen on,
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AWESOME
that was really nice i loved it really heh yeah dso like yeah hmmmmmmmm ok
-Kelsea
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