sha looked at the scars on her ankle and sighed. to her it seamed like each time they started to fade, fresh ones always showed up. "oh well" she thought to herself. that was her outlook on life, no matter what happened it was "oh well". sha pulled up her sock over her scars and put on her shoes. sha got her books and ran off to the bus stop. today was one of the first days she hadn't missed the bus. the bus came and halted to a stop right in front of her. she climbed on the bus,took her seat, and waited till they arrived at hell.1
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ok i know its short but im gonna try and make it into a story but who knows. just tell me if you like it!
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i don't care if it's short, i love it!
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i like it sis, good job i hope it aint about u though, i love u
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okay...i really liked it so I'm going to go find part 2
lol...this was short, but definately grabbed my attention so keep going!
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o thankyou im really glad you like it and i'll try to have another one out soon!
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lol thankyou! lol no i really did mean for that to be her name, lol i had a girl on a softball team named sha and i just fell in love with the name,lol thanks for commenting!
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yea i love it and i want to read more cuz this is great so far so plz keep adding to this i love it lotz
love ya
~*becca*~
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great write i love how u leave em hanging whether intentional or not it was still good powerful thought provoking all the means to make a good story 'Sha' huh sounds like a hidden error but i gueesss it her name good cover lol jk great write
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lol o thanks im glad you liked it, o ya the she is spoused to be sha, thats her name, lol but thanks for pointing that out!
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I like it, I want to know more, don't leave me hanging! Oh, yeah you missed spelled she by "Sha pulled up her sock"
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