Apophasis

Apophasis • \uh-PAH-fuh-sis\  • noun 1

: the raising of an issue by claiming not to mention it.2

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Ashen faced and exhausted, Nickole sat at her desk, speaking narry a word. The tintinnabulation caused her to cover her ears and wince. The teacher payed no attention to the bell, and continued to sit at his desk, immersed in a book that looked tedious to read.4

Nickole let out a squeal as something was jabbed hard into her back. She turned around angrily, but her face immediatly softened at the sight of Seth. His face mirrored innocence, and Nickole burst with laughter as she stole the dull pencil from his grasp. 5

Seth grinned, brushing the blue-tipped black hair from his eyes. 'So, how goes the day?' he asked, trying to imitate an english accent. Nickole rolled her eyes, tapping him on the head with the pencil.6

'I'm not even going to dicuss what Ryan said to Matthew about me!' she exclaimed, groaning with the utmost disgust. 7

Seth raised an eyebrow at her and put his hand on the top of her head. 'What'd he say?'8

'I said I'm not going to talk about it!' she exclaimed, clenching and unclenching her fists. 9

'You already brought it up!' Seth exclaimed, retreating his hand safely below his desk.10

Nickole shook her head and slumped down in her chair, her chin resting on Seth's desk. The rest of the class talked amongst themselves, but the pair remained silent for a few moments.11

The classroom door was thrown open, and Ryan ambled in. Nickole sat forward in her chair. Ryan had his hand in the pocket of his jeans, and a red jacket draped nonchalantly over his shoulders. He glared with the utmost loathing in Nickole's direction, but then winked. 12

Seth was dumbfounded, and looked from the back of Nikki's head to Ryan. Nickole seemed to be overcome with the same amazement, for she gaped, open-mouthed, at the spot where Ryan had previously stood. It seemed he had proceeded to his seat across the room.13

Author notes

I have utterly no idea....

I might continue this if I get any ideas to it. More of a spur-of-the-moment thing....

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  • July 13, 2006

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    Awsome!!!!

    ok may i say ..finally somthing that i dont have to start screaming in the middle...i actully was quite proud of the not blood in this....i could tell there was romance in the air...winks.. joke..no but seruisly i liked it ..u should keep going...if only i had short spiky blue tipped hair.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 3, ending: 4, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

  • blha lhidhosfsk
    October 18, 2005
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    oooh please more! i love dudes with black hair!!! please more more more (with a rebel yell she shouted, more, more more) sry lolz i really had too do that (even though i hate billy idol blegh) anyway....vun de bar!--

    countess


  • aRdNeK
    October 17, 2005
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    Ooo, I want to read more! lol I really like the way this story is starting out. It makes me wonder what Nickole is thinking that she won't tell anyone. Perfect story for the definition of apophasis, how Nickole mentioned something yet refuses to talk about it. Great job! Keep up the amazing work!


  • antibeautiful
    October 17, 2005
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    I liked it, and I hope you continue with it.