Let the rain fall down

So let the rain fall down,1

So let the ocean sway,2

So let the people in our lives,3

Pass away.4

And I, see your crystal blue eyes,5

I see your smiling face,6

And I would close my eyes,7

But your still there.8

And I believed you, when you said,9

That you’ll always be with me,10

But I lie awake, on my bed,11

‘Cause I know your in my dreams.12

So let the rain fall down,13

And let the mountains rise,14

And let the earth stand still,15

As it slowly dies.16

You always said I’m strong in heart,17

But you left me on my own,18

And I lack the strength to handle ,19

The world alone.20

And there’s nothing that, I won’t give,21

To hear you call my name,22

But now the hell in, which I live,23

Will never be the same.24

But I let the rain fall down,25

I let my heart feel pain,26

I let I let the wine, of love,27

Flow through my veins.28

You’re there, in all your favourite rooms,29

You haunt my steps, and view,30

My every longing move,31

Begging me, to join you.32

So when the heavens, shed their tears,33

I look into the sky,34

And I will whisper: have no fear,35

Baby please don’t cry.36

So I let the rain fall down,37

I let the oceans sway,38

I let the people in my life,39

Pass away.

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  • Asfand
    October 29
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    Hm, very nice.
    Rhythmic flow and almost lyrical.
    I like it.
    Thanks for entering!
    Good luck!

  • rustic
    September 25

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    This is so ...so..sadool

    I mean like sad and cool. I love the flow in the beginning and toward the end...it kinda went astray for me in the mid beginning. But, non-the-less very good (to me at least).
    It was more like a song for me so it twas like a singing poem