The Chilled Disire

The chill of the cold air on Ellen's bare naked body elected a gasp from her. Ellen stode up and walked torwards the lake with the light of the moon guiding her steps. she slowly  steped into the Icy cold water and the sensations made her shiver. The pleasure of the coldness on her fueled her disire, in made her arche, to burn, It made her want...Want to feel the touch of Mandie's lips on hers. Soon it seemed as if her disire was met. Mandie swayed into the water silently watching Ellen glide around in the icy water. As Mandie got closer to Ellen she started to hear Ellens shallow breaths of pleasure emiting from her pale pink lips. Ellen began to feel warmth covering her body, she opened her eyes to be welcomed by Mandie's dark ones. A smile of secrets passed on to 1

Madie's lips as she pulled Ellen back towards her and leaned down and Captured Ellens pale pink lips in a burning arching kiss. Passion pooled from the kiss, souronding  them both. Ellen pulsed with  hunger, want disire, She took control of the kiss. Mandie let go, let Ellen lead.2

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  • Ashes and Air
    October 23
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    thank you, I hope to write more such stories yet need inspiration lol.


  • Emerald-Spirit
    October 15
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    Very erotic. I can picture the scene in my mind. Short but intriging. Would like to read more Love it! Xe-sX

  • This is very sweet Is it a true story?

  • FyreFox
    February 24
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    um... I liked this.

    Im not used to reading stories like this one- but it was very good! *smiles sweetly*

  • Ashes and Air
    November 2, 2005
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    yeah, is that ok?

  • BlackedAshes
    October 17, 2005
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    Ok i guess that was cool but isnt that two chicks names

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