He stared blankly at her and shrugged. “Okay.” He said, giving her a strange look. She couldn’t believe how uncaring it sounded, and it seemed all her suspicions of him lying were correct. 1
“You know what that means…right?” she asked, blinking. 2
“That we’re officially breaking up.” He replied, his expression unchanging.3
“Good.” She said, turning away. For some reason, the tears wouldn’t come anymore. She was sort of dumbfounded at his reaction. However, she told herself it didn’t matter.4
She still couldn’t believe it was over. Not only that, she couldn’t believe that she had ended it. She walked numbly, not turning back to see his expression. The whole thing seemed unreal…but she couldn’t do anything about it.5
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And thus, that's how it ends. Not very interesting, but that's how it went....except over the internet.
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simply amazing.
You know lately i been curising myself a lot...And it's for all those times I couldnt protect you..for all those time I couldnt be there for you. Actully i still curse myself alot..I remebered around the time this happened... As usuale I was the last one to know. you always had a happy face who could have known ... Or meaby I just didnt look hard enough. Even when I did find out. I was powerless to help ... I tried to put humor into it by making fun of the jerk. But I dont think that really helped at all... I didnt feel i could do mush else. I felt useless to be honest. But I guess the reason I didnt try harder was becuse I didnt feel at that momment I was anyone to protect you. You had lots of friends my friends who I love. I never figure I could make a diffrance. But at some point somewhere the guy thing kicked in. The need to protect and stuff. And now I know I proably do anything to protect you. weathere you will let me or not. I would try regardlessly to make a diffrence. You know this was almost a year ago. And i am berely apoligising for it. But you know i know i am proably goanna keep cursing myself a lot. But I have to try and not just for you but for ashley chicken. I know that was long but just had to get it out. I mean now ure fine and hey you gone with matlock wich its impossible for him to hurt you. Simply is. But if he does not only will I beat him up. But ill do whatever it takes to make you feel the tiniest bit better. whoa had to get all mushy.
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This is soooooo sad, I hate when stuff like this happens
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i once i had an online bf....we were friend before we hooked up. we were like together for three days and then he dumped me. i wasnt mad...but i was mad. i have another bf(onlinetoo) but he's actually much better than my previous one. he just came out of a really bad relationship and stuff. but we talk on the phone-he lives in GA where i have family and visit alot so its...like werid...but perfect.
if that even makes any sense. but anyway you did an awesome job with this. i think this is the best break up story ive ever read!!! but still sad in a way
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WOW!! That sounds about exactly right where I'm at with my boyrfriend as of yesterday, tears just won't come anymore... good job!!
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Online relationships...I know the feeling of those. I had a very special someone in my life from the Internet, and he called me every night, even though he lived in another country. But then, one day he just broke up with me. So I know how you feel. But I'm sure, just like me, that you'll find someone worthwhile.
Great job! Keep up the amazing work!
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im new here and i looked at lots of your work and i really liked it!!!!
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Well, the majority of it was that a long time ago, I introduced two of my friends on the internet (Him and some chick from PA) They hit it off and like..fell in love and that crushed me because I've known Alex since I was five and loved him since we were 8 or nine...And then they had some huge falling out and they cheated on eachother and his mom won't let him talk to her (this was a year and a half ago..) and they broke up.... Yeah. And then he said he loved me..and I believed him (Because I'm a dumb ass) and Saturday would've been their anniversary..so he went all emo on my ass ((in other words depressed)) and I told him to go talk to her because of course he still loves her, and then he's like "Can we take a little break so I can sort things out? I mean, not like break up..because I don't want to..but just take a breather" and I said sure ((damn, this is one long run on sentence)) and then later I told him we should take more than just a break..and then the story kicks in. Well, the first part...did you read the first part?
*blinks*
Alrighty. All done. xD
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oooh i get it. the mystery is solved i guess. thats kinda how i broke up with my last boyfriend. he kept flirting with this other girl so i got mad at him and i wasnt even blunt about it i just said "oh i dont like sophia" and he was like "is i cause im always hanging out with her?" and i was like "well you do hang out with her and flirt with her more then you do me.its not gonna work if you keep doing that." and he was just like "fine". and then he left me for sophia that day. it was actually the last day of camp but w/e. sry, ive been rambling quite alot today havnt i? owell.
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