Alice: she has brown hair and a side fringe. She has an athletetic body and does gymnastics. Alex is her closest friend but also has a few other close friends. alice will be a Protagonists. 1
Alex: He has black hair which is cut short. he has a lean body while being muscular as well. His closest freind is alcie but, like alicce, has few other friends as well. alex will be a Protagonists. 2
Jasper: Blonde hair with a fringe. He has a tan and is muscualr as well. he does athletics. He was popular in last school and plans to be the same in the new school. jasper looks like the good guy but in fact is the Antagonists. 3
alice has a had a tough childhood. At 12 her father left her, her mum and her little sister, angel, for another woman. before he left alice would hear her mum and dad fight. she would curl up under the duvet and try to go to sleep or pretend to talk to alex. alice loves her mum but particularly her little sister. alex knows everything there is to know about alice. alice goes to fbs(friern barnet school) and likes it there. she is the only girl that does not follow kelly. alice wants to be a lawyer when she is older. she studies hard and has hope that she will accomplish her dream. 4
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This is BIG MISTAKE!!!!!!!! it's not supposed to be online. it's my class work!!!!
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hey whether its meant to be on here or not, its good!did u by any chance....read twilight?lol just because of the names is all...haha i think u should write a story on here from it
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You can always delete it lol
I still think you could develop a story from this! If you decide to let me know and I will read and comment!! ^^ -
dude... its not bad.. why not put it online? and if it kills u just delete it.
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LOL....this is actually really good. and why dont u just delete it if its not supposed to be online, and its class work?
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Not bad
I like your characters, and I think it could be going somewhere whether its for class or not. I really like the name Alice, and it seems like she has a busy, interesting life. I really like the name Jasper, it sounds almost like the name of a tree. Anyways, keep it up, and best of luck with the development of your stories/your homework.
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Well if it's for class then why not delete it?
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This is actually a good writing
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You could always delete it you know. Nice little introduction to the characters.
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