Here are some poems I wrote. Pretty basic but I had to outlet my sadness. I had been in my room crying...I guess this was my way of getting over it.1
Red Eyes,
Tear stained sheets,
Silenced screams,
Hallow inside,
Quiet sobs
...waiting for death2
So scared,
I don't even recognize myself,
Red puffy eyes,
Tear streaked cheeks,
Is this the real me?3
Overwhelmed by my own self pity,
Stop caring about others,
I feel sorry for myself,
Everyones words scarring me,
Everyones thoughts burying me,
A deeper grave4
I stand broken,
Can someone fix me,
Or am I now worthless?
You don't need me,
Why appreciate me?
I'm nothing but broken parts.5
I need to cut,
I need to replace the pain inside,
I'll shed my blood,
I'll shed my tears,
I'll feel nothing,
But cuts,
Don't hurt me inside,
Just take the outside.6
You heard my cries,
You chose not to listen,
You saw my pain,
You chose to look away,
And now there is nothing to see or hear.
Comments
-
The best line was, 'I'm nothing but broken parts.'
A very despairing teenaged drama. Locking yourself in your bedroom and crying all of the frustration out of your body. Writing it down can be a great way of purging the angst. Well written, clear and precise.
-
I liked this. I feel like this at the moment...which I don't think is a good thing..Anyway great poem. I loved everything about it.
Adding your comment:
