Screeching calls of a single name filled the room, rain pouring on the window pane, and blood oozing out of an innocent girl's stomache; this had been the night that he had came for her, ready to destroy the young girl he had created by science, and finish off her barely lived life.
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I don't even know. xD
A contest entry
- Hook Me In A Sentence by CallMeWhenUrRich.
1210 points, ended November 15, 72 entries
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I liiiiikkke it, oh my my mamasita don't you knooow that the run-on sentences truly make a sentence what it isss? Yaaaaaa that's what you did here, hooked me in! What happens? How'd she come to paaaiin? I'm curious to know
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Sounds a little sci-fi like at the end, mixed with some dark fnatasy in this. Frankenstein kept running through my head.
Thanks for entering my contest and good luck!!! 
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..It does kind of remind you of Frankenstein, doesn't it? xD
Thank youuu. =]
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Disturbing. o.o But good.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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weird.But wonderfully writen.
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ha! you didn't even know why you wrote that... heh, great visuals! I could see everything you put into this! Loved it.
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