Truth of Life

   Sitting within my chaotic  mind,
 
I contemplate the
 
                         future of yesterday
 
     and what life means.
 
The profound truth of life
                                               
                               dangles
 
behind a web of confusion,
 
                           mortality,
 
and the inevitability
 
             of death.

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  • x-VisionaryMinor-3
    September 23
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    It was very good but

    And what about love? What is life itself without the emotions and concept of what make us living creatures?