Can I Hook You?

"Awful things have happened in this bathroom."

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  • Le Masquerade silver member
    October 9

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    Ewww...yuck...gross...That sentence can be interpreted in so many different ways...Still it does catch a persons eye so I guess you did a pretty good job

    -Masq


  • CallMeWhenUrRich
    October 3

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    Hahaha!!! I hope it wasn't something...how do I put it, gross. I really liked this sentence, it leaves a reader hooked and I do want to know what happened in there. Definitely in the finalists.

    Thanks for entering and good luck!!!


  • corrupthoughts
    September 25

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    haha! wow, what ideas did my mind get when I read this..

    The word awful to start, on its own, creates an interesting aura.


  • SuperLove345
    September 25

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    ahaha! I love it.
    you should probably write more...just sayin'.
    haha.


  • tonialoise
    September 23

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    ummm.... ewwwwwww.... That's about all I can think about when I see this. I mean there's so many ways you can take that and so few are something that wouldn't be gross. But that doesn't make it any less hooking. So what did happen in the bathroom?


    • Neomaxizoondweebie
      September 23
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      There are so many directions I could take this I have no idea which one to choose

      But thank you for the comment!


  • luvmcr444
    September 22
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    niiiiice

  • Adinatak
    September 22
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    Oh I remember this! Such naughty things could be derived from this sentence...I like it.

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