With the car parked, my stilettos tossed somewhere, he moved panther-like toward me. His warm, perfect skin pressed to my body as he kissed circles down my chest. Fingers played along my panty-line, then quickly and assuredly slid my thong down my legs. His tongue traced a path lower and lower until he passed lightly over my womanhood, teasing me into moaning. He kissed around my ankle and I was shuddering and begging; "Darling, please!" Just when I thought I'd die if he didn't have me, I felt him push into me, bringing a new calm and excitement over me.1
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Last night was great...
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Giggling* Thank you!
Arielle Giselle -
stilettos!! woooo i love them..i wish i had like 500 billion pairs of them...ok no that many loll. but still. hot write...sounds like you did have a lot of fun last night...sounds like the kind of stuff that happens with me and my boyfriend...sounds like ur man knows what you want...teehee...wondeful job.
Firefly -
Wow. Very well written. Hot too.
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Great poem. I remember the days of love making in the back seat. Emjoy them while you can because once you get older its not quite the same. My boyfriend and I tried this a year ago and I found I wasent near as flexable as I once had been and was left in pain for the rest of the week. Great poem!!!!!
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Thank you Amby. The backseat is very fun, especially because I really don't have very many options! Occassionally my parents ro his parents will be gone, but mostly, we're doing quickies in random places. Thank you for reading and commenting
Arielle Giselle -
Thank you royal, but no, this experience was NOT short It was actually very long and sensual, the way I like it!
Thank you again.
Arielle Giselle -
o, that was interesting..
i liked it,
it was hot and start to the point,
but it must have been exciting
cant say ive done it in the backseat of a car..
I loved the poem,
i would love to read more of your work,
and keep the excellent pieces coming
xXx
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well...that was a quick and short one..much like the experience? quite a hot little write here
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I wouldn't be able to walk in heels. As for your question:
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Last night was great...
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Thank you RDT.Actually stilettos aren't that bad at all. I wear a pair two-four times a week and I mamge t owalk fine in them. I wonder whta you mean by "I hope last night was all you were expecting, then"?
Arielle Giselle -
Hm...Nice. I hope last night was all you were expecting, then.
I love stiletto heals, even thoguh I would never wear them. They just sound so sexy, though I wouldn't know, for the life of me, HOW anybody manages to walk in them! Thank you for entering and best of luck to you. 
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