Un- Perfect World - Chapter 6

Justin walked into the doctors office and walked up to the counter. Behind the desk sat a blonde haired woman, "May I help you?" she asked in a soothing voice. "Erm yea I got an appointment at 1:30." Justin replied. The receptionist typed on the keyboard lightning fast like, "Justin?" Justin nodded his head. "Alright the doctor will be right with you." Justin walked over to the chairs and sat in one and pulled up a Time magazine. He read it contently looking at it as if it were a Sports Illustrated Swim Suit Edition. A door opened "Justin?" a mans voice called out. Justin got up and walked over.1

"Hey doc whats up?" he shook the doctors hand. The doctor didn't reply with a "nothin much, how 'bout you?" but with a "follow me please." They walked down a long narrow hallway. He opened a door to a room with a bunch of weight scales and other shiny instruments. "Nice place ya got doc." Justin chuckled. The doctor pulled out a clipboard and jotted down things from Justin's file. "Step over to the scale please." the doctor instructed, Justin walked over as the doctor said and let him take the measurement, he weighed 125, not bad, not 100% good, but not bad. "Turn around and take off your shoes please." Justin smiled, "This isn't so bad I don't see what Jake was laughing at." he thought to himself. Justin was 5'9". The doctor walked Justin over to the patient's bench and checked his blood pressure and other breathing stuff that Justin had no clue what he was talking about but he did what the doctor said. 2

"Well I guess that's it thanks doc!" Justin walked to the door and was stopped by the doctor, "You're not done." Justin turned around and blinked "Okay..." The doctor smirked, "Drop your trousers, bend over, turn your head and cough." Justin's eyes went wide "DO WHAT WITH MY WHAT NOW!?!?!?!?!" he looked at the doctor with a face that only a mother could love, "LOOK DUDE I DON'T SWING THAT WAY!!!!" The doctor sighed and showed him the physical exam paper and one of the mandatory sections was labeled "Genitals" Justin gulped, "Okay... but no funny stuff old man... I know my rights!!!!" The doctor sighed, "Yes I know, I get that a whole lot, now let's get this over with." And so it was, Justin did what the doctor told him. 3

Justin walked up to the counter with a blank face on and handed the receptionist a 50 dollar bill and didn't even get his $15.67 in change back, he just walked out, silent.4

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fun chapter I'm starting this back up!!!! YAY!!!!

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  • Co-Co-Cola
    January 4, 2006
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    OH my god!!! I didn't expect that!!!!! Oh that bastard Doctor for doing his job!

  • Irilis4u
    October 31, 2005
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    Jake is so michief I love his character,
    lol.

  • Kristen Corpse
    October 26, 2005
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    xD Nice Joe.


  • ShadowFox
    October 23, 2005
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    XD lmao


  • tieed
    October 22, 2005
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    Giggles
    Yay i'm glad you started the story back up. I like the characters and the humor. I certainly dislike Dr. visits that end up with something like that. I doubt anyone truly enjoys being fondled by some old dude with cold rubber-covered hands. XD
    Nice work here, i'm off to read more!!
    Edited on Oct 22, 9:12 p.m. because ''.

  • LadyMidnight07
    October 17, 2005
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    that is so bad.
    now i know what was so funny.
    jake was mean not to warn him.
    i love it so far cant wait till you write more.
    peace for now

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