My Sentence....Twenty Something Words.

When I opened my eyes he was gone, but what he left behind made me smile, though a sad one nonetheless.

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  • Le Masquerade silver member
    October 9
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    That sounds so sweet But I wouldn't know until I read more. Nice sentence, I really liked it!

    -Masq


  • CallMeWhenUrRich gold member
    September 24

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    Aww, this seems like a start of a sad but very sweet and romance. I would have loved to find out what had been left.

    Thanks for the entry in my contest and ood luck!


  • lavanya
    September 23
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    well done, intrestng and sweet line...i enjoyed it and felt hooked ..good job dear
    Good luck fo r contest.