What a Cinderella Girl

She was shattered
broken down and bruised1

She'd been plucked out of glamour
&& left in a world of hand-me-down ribbons
&& secondhand pearls2

(what a girl)3

So she'd cry at night, thinking how
baby dolls were better than baby tears
and how the beatings were preferable to this4

Thinking about mommy's hands and daddy's plans
&& how she'd love to brush that doll's hair
one
last
time5

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Author notes

-Andi

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  • TwiztidMaggot
    September 22

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    this is very good. It seems though as it could be a bit longer... I like it though. Keep up your great work.

    TwiztidMaggot


    • Andiness
      September 22
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      Thanks!! I couldn't think of what else to write though!! Lol!

      -Andi