Random poems made up in class!

You say that you like me,1

but that were just friends;2

Can I fell the same,3

Well I guess that depends:4

Can I quit breathing fast,5

Each time you appear?6

Can my heart stop it's pounding,7

Each time you are near?8

I'd like to feel nothing,9

And get rid of the thrill.10

I wish I'd stop loving you,11

But I don't think I will.
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What is the meaning of love?12

is it just a mere thing like lust?13

Or some magical thing from above?14

Maybe it's an emotion we base upon trust.15

This is something we all wonder about,16

It keeps us up at night.17

This is a thing many of us doubt,18

And some may be wrong and others right.
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We are still left with this question,19

We may have many definitions,20

But this search for love is turning into an obsession,21

And how to find love has become our main mission,22

So despite our different thoughts,23

Everyone knows that true love cannot be taught.
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Shall I compare love to a rose?24

It's velvety complexion is breathtaking,25

As it's intoxicating scent burns my lungs,26

It gracefully stands in the soil,27

While awaiting vain admirations,28

Beautifully aesthetic,29

Genuinely rare,30

Though not perfect.31

If I were to compare love to a rose,32

Then this love has already ended,33

Petals will gradually wither,34

It's scent will say it's farewell while,35

Leaving only dead thorns,36

And a broken heart.
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What would it be like, a life without love?37

No mother to annoy you and set a curfew,38

No brother or sister to shove,39

No partner to worry about, you can date two,40

No friends to be jealous of,41

No nanny to tuck shirts in,42

I dream of a life without love,43

There'll be no one to accuse you of sin.
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But with no love,44

There will be no mother to cook your favourite meals,45

No brother or sister to advise, even if they cause you strife,46

No partner to love you back, and understand the way you feel,47

So many more things i would miss in a life like this,48

A life without love does not exist.
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Shall I compare our friendship to an everlasting day?49

Comfortable, Warm and pleasant,50

The birds singing as if all sadness away,51

As if nothing in the world is unpleasant,52

The sun shining brightly in the light blue sky.53

Spreading it's light and heat,54

Burning bright white like the heavens eye,55

Asking the dark and cold to retreat.
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Like the day let our friendship be nice and warm,56

Like the night let there be no cold and dark,57

Let there be no storm amongst the calm,58

Let that be our friendship mark!59

As long as we live, We shall be friends,60

The night will never come and the day never end!61

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  • Hexen
    September 22

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    Awww

    Its really sweet, short suimple and too the pint

    Good job - me like the L O T S !!!
    xox HEX xox


    • Loko-mental
      October 28
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      thanks for the comment, and I hope you read the rest of my stories (dw if you dont)
      p.s whats HEX mean?


  • I am forever me
    September 22

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    awwww

    thats so sweet but i dont think it will win u ???e cause like yeah but still really sweet and remember u still hav hayden
    always lana