After Julia and Michaela leave Ripto's place the head back to the Lone Tower.Julia.So Michaela do you know what this thing does at all?1
Michaela.Yeah i do.Vin invented it when i was 8 and he showed the whole counsel to use it in case if anything happens.2
Julia.Well what does the purple button do?3
Michaela.That's when someone is trap is in "s.s".It lets someone talk to you for a very short time unfortunately4
Julia.*presses the purple button*5
*Erol shows up for a short time*6
Erol.:Liston to me!I need to tell you this....One gas can be use...and that gas is two times stronger than the other gases in the collector that gets it from the atmosphere...the gas collector is unstable so you don't know which one carries the right gas and...*Erol is cut off*7
Julia.What do you think Erol was talking about?8
Michaela.I have a idea on what Errol was talking about.9
Julia.Doesn't surprise me.10
Michaela.Do i really have to say it?11
Julia.*hopes on*12
*flies off to balloon city*13
Julia.Are we there yet?14
Michaela.We get there when we get there.15
Julia.Say where are we going?16
Michaela.Well it has two names,Gas Collector Island know as GCI or Balloon City or BC17
Julia.OK.18
Michaela.Here we are!19
Julia.Whoa!OK this is giving me goose bumps.20
Michaela.Why?Afraid of heights?I used to be.i couldn't fly 56 feet off the ground.Besides I wouldn't let you fall.21
Julia.OK22
*Michaela lands on the huge platform*23
Michaela.Hey Julia you have a pen and paper?24
Julia.No but there is some over there.*points to a notebook and pen*25
Michaela.Hey this is Jak's!26
Julia.Jak's?He was here?27
Michaela.Yeah but he wouldn't have left this behind.That's strange.28
Julia.Hey there is compass over here.*looks at Jak's notebook and looks at the compass*They have the same markings!29
Michaela.They do and I have been here before and all of the markings match,trust me.30
Julia.Hey this is Jak's log*presses the play button*31
Jak's log:Who ever finds this LEAVE NOW!GET AWAY AT ONCE!you don't know that there is a powerful force field...*gets cut off*32
Michaela.First Erol is gone..now Jak...i think the connetion the "s.s"and Ripto I think he may have put Daxter under his control and33
made him mess with the wire.34
*Julia nods her head*35
Man.Hey who are you two?36
Michaela.Julia...37
*Man come a little closer*38
Julia.Yeah?39
Michaela.Run.40
*Michaela and Julia run and the man follows*41
Man.GET BACK HERE!42
*turns into a dragon and Julia hops on*43
Michaela.Whew that was close and now it is will be easy getting to the flying ship on the other balloon.44
I must interrupt the part of this trilling tale you are reading.45
Whew Michaela said"Whew that was close and now it is will be easy getting to the flying ship on the other balloon."That is utter nonsense because it you paid any attention to this part when they escape from the man you could tell he was not alone so the phrase i tell you what Michaela will say is "speak of the devil"that meant if you say i hope it doesn't rain when i am playing golf today and it does you would say "speak of the devil" and then you drive home and dry off and watch Tiger Woods play and win the game.Now back to the story.46
Michaela.Speak of the devil!47
*Air pilot #1 shoots nets at them but they doge them*48
*30 minutes later and they land*49
Julia.Jeez!That almost got us killed!50
Michaela.You see?My job is no walk in the park now lets get inside and.....51
Julia.What?52
Michaela.Remember what Erol said?The two gas collators!53
Julia.Huh?I don't get what you are saying.54
Michaela.Erol said something about a gas collector or something.I have recorded it on a tape recorder.*Hits the play button*55
Erol on tape.Liston to me!I need to tell you this....One gas can be use...and that gas is two times stronger than the other gases in the collector that gets it from the atmosphere...the gas collector is unstable so you don't know which one carries the right gas and...56
Julia.Now I get it but*pushes the lever*the levers are stuck!57
Man#2.HA!I found you!58
Michaela.PRAXSIS?59
Praxsis.The one and only.60
Michaela.Great,just great!I had to run into you!61
*Praxsis summons demons*62
Prixsis.FIGHT THAT!63
Michaela.Well,these are the easiest so Praxsis still has not got a brain.64
*Michaela kicks major butt*65
Julia.You know we can use wands right?66
Michaela.Yeah but this is MORE fun.67
*Julia punches a demon*68
Julia.Yeah have to agree.69
Man#3MAHWHOA!70
*demonds turn to dust and praxsis is gone*71
*Hits the man and reliesis that it is spyro*72
Spyro.OW!What did you do that for?!73
Michaela.Opps.74
Julia.Good going.Really smart there Michaela.75
Spyro.We need to leave!Fast!Praxsis set a bomb here!76
*they all run to the ship*77
Spyro.AGH!It's locked!78
*Erol appears again*79
Erol.HURRY.GET TO BOSHES TUNNELS!YOU DON'T HAVE MUCH TIME GO!80
*Erol disappears again*81
*BOOM!*82
Spyro.HOP ON!WE DON'T HAVE TIME TO OPEN IT!HALF OF THE BALLOON IS ON FIRE!83
As Spyro told them to hop on they soon left....leaving the remains of once a lovely gas collector chamber....destroyed.84
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Pretty good!At the end i felt inside like spyro was screaming and that and exsplotion felt real inside and i thought i could hear itbeginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 4, overall: 8, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 3.
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