I want to die today

I want to die today,
it is so easy to run away,
to let it all go,
to punish who love me so.1

I want to slit my wrists,
but they think I am so in bliss,
they don't know,
and I am tried of not trying to show.2

It is hard to let it all go,
why can't I die today and let the pain ebb away,
it has been years and I have been trying,
I know I won't be dying today.

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Just a random one. I am stressed..

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  • MoreTears2Fall
    September 21

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    This is written really well, but it is sad. I hope ur ok =(

  • Adinatak
    September 21

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    This was wonderfully composed but I hope I see some happier pieces from you soon. Whatever is going on I hope it blows over.

    *hugs*


  • lavanya
    September 21

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    i hope you are ok , and this is not your current mind set.. feel fine dear and don't let your stress take over ur sanity...be strong sweet friend.