It is a warm summer evening.. 1
They are sitting together in the gazebo, in the garden, outside her cottage. It is a riot of color and completely closed off from the outside world, as the driveway gate is closed. 2
There is just the two of them, and the sights and scents and sounds of summer. The air is filled with lavender and herbs and roses, there is a drone of bees and a hummingbird calling, and a gentle breeze is blowing. Not enough to chill, just enough to take the edge off the sun's heat. 3
She leans over and gives him a slow, lazy kiss, taking her time about it, he raises a hand to her head and holds her there, her mouth on his, as he slips his tongue between her lips. 'Mmmmmmmmmmmm' she murmurs... less a sound than a gentle vibration on his mouth. 4
She takes his face between her hands as the kiss deepens, stroking it, exploring it with her fingers, getting to know every part of it. Then her hands slide down his neck, and across his shoulders caressingly, but she never breaks the kiss. A sound of pleasure comes from his throat. His arms go round her, and he pulls her tight against him, and she gasps at how he feels, whispering softly, "That's wonderful... you feel so good.”5
He lifts his lips from hers for a second and ask with a grin and a suggestive twinkle in his eye, "Would you like to go inside?" She just smiles and shakes her head. Then she stands up and takes his hand. She leads him towards the corner of the garden, where the honeysuckle climbs the fence and gestures towards the mossy lawn... "Wouldn't this be nicer?" she asks. 6
He smiles, and they both kneel, facing each other on the ground. Their hands unfasten each others shirts, removing them with gentle and loving caresses, and then he reaches behind her and unfastens her bra. 7
The breeze touches their skin and they lean against each other, kissing. He can feel her taut nipples pressing hard against his chest and his hands come up to stroke her breasts. She whimpers quietly as his thumbs brush firmly over those hard tips, and then pushes him gently backwards until he is lying on the soft moss as she kneels above him. Her hands are at his waistband and she strips him, quickly and effectively, so that in moments he is completely naked. 8
She bends her head to kiss the tip of his stiff cock and take it in her hands, caressing it, stroking it. He gives a long, low, moan of pleasure which cuts off with a gasp as she takes the head into her mouth. 'Oh, yes...' he breathes softly. Her tongue teases him with little flickering motions across and around the tip, tracing the foreskin, as her hands keep stroking him... his cock, his balls, his thighs. He sits up a little and unfastens her skirt pushing it, and her underwear, off her hips. 9
She wriggles right out of her clothes, still licking and caressing him, then she presses him backwards again, lifts her head and sits astride him "Yes?" she says. 10
He just nods his head silently, looking into her eyes.11
She slips herself onto him with a delicate slowness, and they both gasp as he is enclosed within her hot cunt and its walls sheath and embrace him. He lifts his hips to meet her downward movement, eager to be deep inside her, as eager as she is to have him there. She starts to move back and forth with an insistent rocking motion, leaning forward to kiss him intensely, once again holding his face between her hands. His hands in their turn caress first her breasts then her shoulders and back, then down, until they are resting lightly on her hips. 12
She increases both the pace and the pressure of her movements, pressing down against him hard, stimulating her clitoris with every movement, she is hot and slick as she slides over him, and he is loving every moment of it. 13
His hands tighten on her hips and he pulls her down on him tight as he drives his hips up against her, pushing himself further and further into that inviting, bewitching heat. They are both moving rapidly now, frantically, their tongues tangle, as much a part of the love-making as the other place they are joined. 14
Faster, harder, deeper, he moves. She is struggling for breath, and shuddering as her climax crashes over her, but still she doesn't slow her insistent movements, but just keeps on moving on him, enthusiastically. She can feel his orgasm approaching, as he tenses, his breathing shallow and gasping. Suddenly, he forces his hips up hard and she gives a scream of complete abandonment... he is so deep inside. 15
Once, twice, three times he thrusts and then he cums deep, deep inside of her with a loud growl, as she gives a long shuddering sob, her orgasm rocking her one last, incredible time. Utterly spent now, she kisses him slowly, sweetly and whispers "Thank you".16
He wraps his arms around her and holds her there on top of him, and for a few eternal moments they just lie, together totally, exhausted and happy. Finally she moves to rest cradled against his shoulder. She looks up into his eyes, smiles and says 'I love you'. 17
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A sweet read...indeed
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sweet!
right on sister, beautiful writing, erotic, luv it man...
nesca -
Lovely stuff. How am I supposed to function after this? You did this really well, as always. Wonderful erotica and good descriptions.
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mmmmmmmmmmmmm i love that mind of yours...
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Things to do next summers day OK well this is on my list what a pleasent read well told all the best
Paul -
I'm almost blushing! I agree this was extremely .... ah. well... hot! okay i said it. There! It was hot~ bring the imagery and scents of your surroundings heightened the experience. Good luck in the contest...I did enjoy!
~Michelle~
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Out door sex is always fun, as long as there in nothing in the poisen ivy department around!! Athena
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This was indeed very erotic and I just love the detail given to the surrounding images, scents and sounds. They add a nice touch to any story. Everything was well blended and as it should be for a story. The loving strokes, the heat of passion, the lustful, wanton desire... this had it all. And the ending was superb... just as every woman wishes her encounters to be... cradled in the arms of your lover. I did indeed enjoy reading this. You did a wonderful job here.
♥ Touchof1der -
Doesn't hurt to try
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Thank you very much for reading and commenting
peace
*Lust* -
Wow; well, this was definitely intense. The way you described every moment was just truly amazing. You put just enough erotic feelings in it and enough loving, sensual feelings to make it the perfect erotic piece. Great job and good luck in the contest!
Hugs
Jess -
that was very sweet, slow, and passionate very sexy
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'few eternal moments'. such words make your stories both 'common' and masterpieces, at the same time. I don't flatter.
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Thank ya hun. I'm glad you liked it. You cant hide the tent though. We all see it :
Peace
Lust -
Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. Im glad you liked it
Peace
Lust -
Thank you much. Glad you liked it and thanks for reading and commenting on it.
Peace
Lust -
lol, it is always a treat to read one of your erotic stories, i swear. (hides the tent in his pants) that was very good, each story you write seems to top the other ones. to be honest i don't know what to say about this either then it was masterful written and the image were good. however, like all of the other, i still feel dirty watching this in my mind. like a prevert who lives his sex life through those he knows, omg, that is me,lol. this is truly a passionate and exciting moment that you have displayed in this story. from start to end you had my interest and i am never disappointed. that seems like a good place to be with the one you love. or have strong feelings for, or for some just sex. i have to include everyone to be fair. lol, keep up the killer work and i can't wait to see what else you have to say. Lust is the only sin that feels so right,lol. Later Days
Prodigy -
Sensual to the core
It's purely descriptive and entertaining. The careful presentation of the minute details certainly make the story really sensual and it's worth reading to get excited! -
Nicely written. Another passionate moment captured between the words.
Peace,
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turned me on.
what a great read first thing in the morning..very visual.sexy....passionate....great write..
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Lol very good Amazigh. Very good Loved it!
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Did I dream this
or confess such bliss
it cannot be me
who asks so freaky.
Am I too old
to be that bold
or tell dirty tales
as I bite nails.
I imagine I'm young
and extra well hung
not just in balls
but wide and tall.
I rewrite my life
seducing you every night
like you'd say right
and play that fight.
But my aged mind
grows mature and kind
and my lady mine
I love fat behinds.
This is my review and I felt like a laugh with you. -
Thanks just what i asked for, keep em CUMMING
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