I sat at my keyboard. A jumble of thoughts cascading through my mind. Was a really going through with this absurd plan? Did I have the guts to really, truly do what was asked of me.1
Now was the moment. Was I the strong, independent person I wanted to be or was I going to let others tell me what to do?2
I turned the chair around. Stood and dropped my robe....3
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Earlier that night.5
I had a couple of people over. My husband didn't really like that I was a social person, but usually dealt with my get together or hid. Tonight, for whatever reasons, he decided to participate. 6
I was thrilled. This latest one was my most exciting one yet. I thought he would like it, but since he had never joined in, I didn't know.7
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Must have written this when I was on board Captain Morgan's ship, because I don't know where the heck I was going with this. Does is sound a little kinky to you? Or a little black murder? Let me know. Thanks
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It does sound... "kinky" but why don't you write more to make it more clear?
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I have to admit when I read this I thought wow this is something new for you However I think if you explored it in whatever way you wanted to, going kinky or like you are gonna vicariously through your character kill him it would be great! Kinda and interesting trip you took with the Cap'n! Let me come along next time.
I think so far though it sounds pretty interesting. I think I would take it somewhere dark. I think its that time of year where murder, gore and scary stories are fun Go ahead kill him and then call in her friends to help clean up the body after all thats what best friends do! LOL
I would love to see it go somewhere kinky, but I also know you
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one word-kinky
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He...
Obviously this husband is in for group sex.
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Was a really going through -> Was I
It is certainly intriguing...and could go in several directions...perhaps you need to board Captain Morgan's ship (so to speak) and write some more.
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what the eff im confused
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What have you been up to?
I thought that this was the beginning of a get together, alright...and definitely not of the 'normal' type.
A bit kinky? Oh, you don't want to know the thoughts running through my mind when I was reading this. Naughty. Naughty.
I'm glad you stopped right where you did. It leaves a lot to the imagination.
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This does look interesting Brooke. I’m not quite certain if you plan to reward Hubby for taking part in the get together or, if you removed your robe, in order not to get his or someone’s DNA on it durring a not so pleasent act (maybe a murder.).
Whatever your plans, this sounds like it could grow into something
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Geri
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You and Captain Morgan.
This seems intresting. And why can't it be both... A little kinky with a touch of murder.
Let me know if yo write more.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Definitly kinky
-Andi
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Hmmm I don't know where this is going to go quite honestly. But I like the idea of a Witches thing going on.
that personally sounds like an awesome way to go. I'm very curious to see where you take this.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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I definitely sense a kink factor here. *laughs*
That or something dark and foreboding.
The second part sounds kinky while the first part sounds like something dark about to take place. The robe could simply be covering the outfit she plans to wear.
You've definitely piqued my curiosity as to what is about to happen. It will be interesting to see which way you take it from here.
Greg
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Hey Brooke,
I must admit that the kinky young man who still resides in a corner of my mind was first to respond to this little write. He started dancing and singing that old song 'Super Freak' by Rick James.
Then the more analytical side took over and I began to see this as a Freudian slip. Your unconscious mind rebelling against the dominant control of your husband and the status quo you feel controls your life. If you'll just relax here on the couch, my dear, we can explore some of the reasons why you feel this way.
Steve
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Loving the idea =)
Hahaha I had an image of an orgy x.x
I am not sure if that's what you're aiming at, but the mood at the beginning, as well as the fact that the husband does not 'participate' got me thinking that...
That and you asked if it was kinky haha
And yes, I felt as if this was kinky ^_^ and I enjoyed that this intro provides so many things that can happen afterwards, and even if I can be wrong, I do want to know what happens
One thing though, at the top, first paragraph, you wrote 'a' instead of 'I' minor though. Thanks so much for sharing this with us
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Hmm!
I had to think about this, and thinking is something I'm not too good at
I would have to go along with 'kinky'. Was the robe dropped while the other couple were still there? Was it at the instigation of the couple or the husband? What has the keyboard got to do with it? Webcam maybe???
Hmm - yep! definitely kinky
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sounds a bit kinky to me...or blackmailesque. But that might be only me seeing that so.
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I don't have any idea where you are going with this, or even if you are going at all. Much depends on time. Suppose the robe dropping bit came after the party had broken up, that's one line of thought. But suppose the robe dropping came while the party was still going, that's another line of thought. I personally have no time for the so called 'kinky' scene, I am too old fashioned, unless of course, the robe hides the witches outfit.
Confusing? Yes, I guess it is. Then so am I. Best of British, whichever way you go.
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Hmm, at first I thought kinky but simply because of the dropped robe and nothing else. Then I thought, "SageSyren... it's probably something witchy." Heh. I can definitely see it being some sort of witches gathering or something.
By the way, what's a "coincidence mind"?
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I'm not sure. See that is what happens when I've been boozing it up. I was wondering if others could tell me what I was thinking I guess not.
I'm thinking witchy with a bit of kink in there.
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Interesting. I'm not quite sure, my first thought was murder but then as I read on I was thinking more on the kinky side. It almost sounds like some kinky get together with friends. I know what you mean, I have started things then been like what the heck.
I often wonder where my mind even was at the time. Sometimes, it best I don't even know
I think it sounds like it could have been the start of something pretty interesting though.
Joann
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Yeah, see I don't know where I was going with this. I want to see what other people think of it, before I decide to do something risky or not. I think it would shock people to that know me if I wrote something on the erotic side
Thanks for reading.
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I think so too, but hey, a good shock could be fun Let me know if you decide to continue this, I would love to read more on it.
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Will do
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