I slowly opened my eyes to a beautiful paradise. I thought I was in Jamaica, I looked around and saw no one. Then I remembered the ship had sunk and this is where I ended up. I looked around the island and to my surprise I found my backpack floating ashore.1
I started to unload the pack to dry everything out. It contained a beach towel, packed lunch (ham and cheese sandwich, a pudding pack, and chocolate milk). Also in the pack was a pocketknife, a mirror, my favorite CD, a day planner, pink flip-flops, and a pair of sneakers.2
I knew I had to make shelter for myself before dark, so using the CD I dug a small circle in the sand along the beach. Then I cut so small trees with the pocketknife and placed then around the circle. I tied them in place with the laces from my shoes. Then I laid some large leaves across the top of the branches. After that I rested the beach towel inside the circle. The last thing I did before I went to sleep was I built a fire using the paper from my planner and the lighter.3
The next day I woke up and scarfed down my lunch. I decide to take a swim, so going out into the ocean I trip and cut my leg. I knew I had to stop the bleeding, when I got back to camp a franticly look for something the stop the bleeding, I decided to use the flip-flops. I tour off the strap and placed it on the wound. I used the rested of my shoelaces to tie it in place.4
About a month later and I was just getting used to the island when a plane went by so I grabbed my mirror and shined it up at the plane. A week later I was in my room writing this in my diary.5
Author notes
my sister keri wrote this piece and asked me to put it up on the site for her so she can see if people like her work
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